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Broken Promise
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Thirty years have passed,
Since the day the bad news came.
She knew that from that moment,
Life would never be the same.

Each night as she goes to bed,
Her heart for him does yearn.
She recalls the last he said to her,
“I promise I’ll return”

He had to break the promise,
Made as he bid her farewell.
For they told her that her soldier,
On some distant beach had fell.

Now each and every day since then,
She goes down to the shore.
And walks along the ocean,
Where they used to walk before.

She takes a yellow rose with her,
She has kissed tenderly.
She says, “This is for you my dear”
Then she drops it in the sea.

A thousand yellow roses,
Have been placed there by her hand.
In hopes that it may reach him,
On that far and distant land.

On a quiet sandy beach,
Across the ocean far away.
Lies a place so many men had died,
Back on that fateful day.

Two lovers walk along this beach,
Together hand in hand.
As they walk among rose petals,
That have washed upon the sand.

Jack Roberts – January 14, 2003

A fiction


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 Reviews of "Broken Promise"
Reviewed by Debbie Wilson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 19, 2004
This is most beautiful. I really love your style of writing Jack. This means alot to me, as my husband is in Iraq. Thank you.

Debbie Wilson

Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
You painted such a vivid picture that my eyes have misted. Yellow roses are my favorite too.
Sandy

Reviewed by Victor Jensen
Reviewed on January 20, 2003
Such a sad beautiful poem. Someday I hope I can write as well as you.

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on January 15, 2003
This has such a thrilling sadness to it, Jack, gorgeous!!

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on January 15, 2003
Oh Jack,
This was so very sad..
It caused me to get
misty eyed over here..
Such an outstanding
write...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2003
Jack, I have goosebumps all over me. This may be fiction but it was heartbreaking and heartwarming and lovely...Great write. Floria

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on January 15, 2003
Looking through your reviews, I can see your poem has touched many hearts. And isn't that the true goal of poetry? I must remember to thank Smoke for convincing you to write.

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2003
Wonderful, Jack, really and truly wonderful.

Thanks for visiting my page

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
Excellent poem Jack! Bill Murray

Reviewed by Sharron Tyrrell
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
This is so beautiful. YOu must have a romantic heart .. sharron

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
Jack,

This is a very moving write! Beautiful and sad at the same time!

Maria

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
Beautiful heartfelt write...

Reviewed by F. Richardson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
Deeply moving. Excellent tempo. A profoundness all of us can relate to, on more than one level. Beautiful write!

Reviewed by g g (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
Wonderful write(:

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
Incredible write, my friend.
One of the best romantic poems
I have ever read. Sad, but I write
sad too. Sometimes sad is the most
moving. Absolutely awesome. WELL
DONE!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Smith
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
Can't hold a candle to your rhythming! You're awesome!.Beautiful work Jack.

Love,
Beth

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
magical,beautiful,romatic sad....If only a rose could do the trick for me.....
i rather use shells....the friend of the ocean too
Love this write very much
Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
As always, you draw us in & melt our hearts.
Something magical about this one, Jack!

Reviewed by Lorrieann Russell (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
A lovely, sad story, very vivid. I can see her, and the roses. Very well done.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
This poignant piece brings tears, but the writing is so beautiful I can't help but feel joy too...;-)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
Wow this on is sooo special. I love it Jack!

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
Ok not wanting to sound like a broken record here I will just say that you have touched the readers heart and brought a bittersweet moment for us to share.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
A tear jerking beautiful write!

Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
Jack,
Tears in my eyes so sad you've captured something so real. Beautifully written.
Hugs
Nancy

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
Jack- this is so sad, lonely and emotional. Exceptional writing you have here

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
Jack,
Okay now this sent chills up me.
"Two lovers walk along this beach,
Together hand in hand.
As they walk among rose petals,
That have washed upon the sand. "
JUST BEAUTIFUL HEART TOUCHING>
~SMILES
Peggy

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
This is sad but true write...great..cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
sad, beautiful, compelling

good write

john +

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
Wow...I love this write, jack..even tho it's so sad..
Jenni

Reviewed by fare good (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
Beautiful as always thank you.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2003
Very sad....but written with such a tender, skillful hand..ty Jack. Dani

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on January 13, 2003
Deep, beautiful,sad too.Good work Jack.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2003
Absolutely beautiful...and sad, Jack. Well done.

~E


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