Looking through your reviews, I can see your poem has touched many hearts. And isn't that the true goal of poetry? I must remember to thank Smoke for convincing you to write.
Incredible write, my friend.
One of the best romantic poems
I have ever read. Sad, but I write
sad too. Sometimes sad is the most
moving. Absolutely awesome. WELL
DONE!!!!!!!!
magical,beautiful,romatic sad....If only a rose could do the trick for me.....
i rather use shells....the friend of the ocean too
Love this write very much
Love
Tinka
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
As always, you draw us in & melt our hearts.
Something magical about this one, Jack!
Reviewed by Lorrieann Russell (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
A lovely, sad story, very vivid. I can see her, and the roses. Very well done.
This poignant piece brings tears, but the writing is so beautiful I can't help but feel joy too...;-)
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
Wow this on is sooo special. I love it Jack!
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
Ok not wanting to sound like a broken record here I will just say that you have touched the readers heart and brought a bittersweet moment for us to share.
Jack- this is so sad, lonely and emotional. Exceptional writing you have here
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2003
Jack,
Okay now this sent chills up me.
"Two lovers walk along this beach,
Together hand in hand.
As they walk among rose petals,
That have washed upon the sand. "
JUST BEAUTIFUL HEART TOUCHING>
~SMILES
Peggy
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Sandy
This was so very sad..
It caused me to get
misty eyed over here..
Such an outstanding
write...
Trixie :)
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Love from India - Joel -
This is a very moving write! Beautiful and sad at the same time!
Maria
One of the best romantic poems
I have ever read. Sad, but I write
sad too. Sometimes sad is the most
moving. Absolutely awesome. WELL
DONE!!!!!!!!
Love,
Beth
i rather use shells....the friend of the ocean too
Love this write very much
Love
Tinka
Something magical about this one, Jack!
Tears in my eyes so sad you've captured something so real. Beautifully written.
Hugs
Nancy
Okay now this sent chills up me.
"Two lovers walk along this beach,
Together hand in hand.
As they walk among rose petals,
That have washed upon the sand. "
JUST BEAUTIFUL HEART TOUCHING>
~SMILES
Peggy
good write
john +
Jenni
~E