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Your Lonely Eyes
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I don’t know where it started
Or where it all went wrong
The only thing I know for sure
Is you’ve been gone too long

For you I wanted happiness
You know how hard I tried
But I never could remove
The lonely look within your eyes

Was there something you were seeking?
Something I just couldn’t give?
Is it something you have finally found?
In this new life you live

Perhaps someday you’ll call me
To let me know that you’re alright
And I’ll no longer wonder
As I lay alone at night

Perhaps I would not be alone
If I had realized
Just what it might have been?
That put the lonely in your eyes


© Jack Roberts – August 18, 2003



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 Reviews of "Your Lonely Eyes"
Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on January 9, 2004
your heart is showing!!!
and its wonderful, I adore this one Jack............A

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2003
Oh God Jack....So beautiful in its lament...You have an amazing mind....and tender heart.....ty, Dani

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Oh, I pray this one is fiction! Beautifully written, as always.

Reviewed on August 19, 2003
So very sad....great write.
~Kerry

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 19, 2003
Brought tears to my eyes, exceptional write, Jack. Touched my heart.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 19, 2003
bravo...well done....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2003
Oh my Jack...this just sends my tear fountain over the top tonight...Outstanding Piece of Sorrowed, Heartfelt Poetry!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
Reviewed on August 18, 2003
Wow, Jack! This is awesome. I felt the heartache of the "coulda beens"...and I know how that feels. Great write. ;) Silver

Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on August 18, 2003
This just hit a nerve in me, tears.

Nancy

Reviewed by Catherine N (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2003
Jack, such a heartfelt and outstanding write!! Cathy

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2003
Heart touching write.

Reviewed on August 18, 2003
A sad, but expressive write. Excellent.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on August 18, 2003
A well-expressed sad write.

Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2003
This one says alot Jack.
LM

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on August 18, 2003
Excellent. Sometimes all we offer isn't enough.

Gina

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2003
A real tear-jerker, here, Jack. Very nice flow of words and sentiment. It's a very good poem.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 18, 2003
Even your sad poems are so beautifully expressed Jack! I know this isn't about you, who would dare make you sad;-)!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 18, 2003
Now see now you made me cry real bad here!!

My heart is not in a good mood at all!!

Huggs!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on August 18, 2003
Oh Jack! ~tears~ This made me cry! Wonderfully penned,,terribly sad. ~SH~

Reviewed on August 18, 2003
Beautifully written, and so very touching, one of your best Jack,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell
Reviewed on August 18, 2003
Very nice poem Jack. It is sad as Karen said, and I know exactly the feelings expressed in your words because I've "been there". Well done.

Reviewed on August 18, 2003
so sad, jack; well done! :( (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, karen lynn in texas.


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