In addition to my poetry I also write fantasy. This piece was inspired by a picture a reader sent me. She asked me to write a poem about it. I hope you like it.
In the land where faeries dwell There is a story that they tell Of the Faerie Queen Chantel And the human she loved too well
She met him on a summer night When Luna cast her seductive light And perfumed breezes blew just right Leading the queen to her plight
Long had warnings been told By those who had been born old All humans had hearts that were cold With greed only for Faerie gold
But Chantel paid scant heed Distrusting tales of human greed Upon his love words did she feed To her they were as sweet as Meade
Lulled by her own love true and deep His promises she thought he'd keep She gave no thought that all she’d reap Form her love was the tears she'd weep
Under the moonlit starry skies In his faithful lover guise He wooed her with his gentle sighs As he snared her with his lies
The nights of summer turned to fall And the Queen ignored the yearly call To return to the Faerie Hall To attend her wedding Ball.
Though it was her duty’s demand To take another’s marriage hand She could not leave the human’s land And the love she thought so grand.
But winter found her lost and cold For it was as the warnings had foretold By those who were born old The human wanted only her gold
Once he had it he said he must go But would return his love to show In time, her fears began to grow And fill her faerie heart with woe
By Candlemas, the truth was bare She had given up all for the human fair The human who had had but one care The gold of the Faeries’ rare.
Beginning in the month of June Upon the rock where they did spoon Still she weeps under the moon
Bobbi this such a sad tale. I have known, and do still know many, that all they have in their hearts are greed. Greed for everything to go their way; greed for what little money others have; and greed for others possessions. This greed just makes the faerie in each one of us, cry sad tears of being gilted.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world. peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, then I have the right to be."
This is very beautiful. We too enjoy at times writing fantasy and nothing is as rewarding as the world of the magic creatures. In your case, the reward is in your splendid story-poem.
Birgit and Roger
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"The Fairie Queen's Tears" made the forest of my heart greener.
Thank You for this beautiful composition.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world. peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, then I have the right to be."
Birgit and Roger
Reindeer
Beautiful. You bring the picture alive in stimulating, thought provoking verse; well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love Tinka
well done!
Susan
Janet