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Patrick A Granfors

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Honky Tonk Haiku
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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Honky Tonk cowgirl

Wrestles with shot glasses

Shoulders double pinned

 

Honky Tonk cowboy

Hands her another bottle

Shoulders no conscience

 

Honky Tonk husband

Defies the congregation

Shoulders consequence

 

Honky Tonk lawman

Repudiates the contest

Shoulders Revolver

 

 

Copyright 2010 Patrick Granfors

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Honky Tonk Haiku"
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 24, 2010
I used to be a Honky Tonk Husband, and there were many consequences!

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on August 23, 2010
Video game was confiscated by the BATF - Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco and Firearms. Jail time for dirty air time Judge Judy in a tin star raps her gavel, shoots the courtroom some beaver in her blue garter, pelt smokin' lays down the sentence...the congregation's collection plate sure emptied quick. A Monumental Trip into a saloon with no name. Honky Tonk Haiku is an Enforcer for sure, Patrick.

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2010
I like this. Is the lawman the guy who brings the knife to the gunfight? Or does he have a trigger finger? I like the first stanza a lot too. You can almost see the scene play out right in front of you.

Reviewed on August 23, 2010
Intriguing write, Patrick; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 23, 2010
Now, that's a Coup I understand...

Ron

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 23, 2010
A fine tale told in haiku format; well done, Patrick. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on August 23, 2010
Quite the little tangled web woven into these clever Ku's, Patrick.....

Anna

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 23, 2010
I'll take the cowgirl, you and the husband can have each other...e

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 23, 2010
hmmmmmmmmm. Interesting - - - - - I think! ;-)

Reviewed by The Poetess
Reviewed on August 23, 2010
Cute!


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