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Wish Upon A Star

As I look up, to my delight
Stars are shining bright tonight
Should I wish upon this falling star
Oh my sweet love, tell me where you are

The moon shines gently through the trees
Theres no other place, I would rather be
I know theres a sweet love, some where for me
I just haven't found you, can't you see

Smiling face, eyes that sparkle so bright
Are you looking everywhere for me tonight
Don't be shy, please don't hide
For I will stand there, right by your side

Ever so gently, I shall hold your hand
I'd be oh so proud, to be your loving man
I long to find an honest loving wife
That will love me, for the rest of my life

By
Ray Hamilton
The Great Canadian Buzzrad
© Copyright 6 / 2008
All rights Reserved

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Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on July 7, 2009

Lovely writing indeed sweet man..I have missed your poems...as always Excellent writing...stay safe and well...I certainly hope you find your true Love...sighhh...Hugsss

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on July 6, 2009

Hi Ray, Yeah, I know the feeling. My problem is what a song says, "I guess I must be wishing on someone else's star", because someone else is always finding theres. sigh .. Hang in there, Ray... she'll be there before you realize it, and you will be writing another gem. ;)

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on July 3, 2009

Ray, nice piece of writing, you old buzzard!

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

Well Mr. Buzz they are out there. And they will find you before you find them. Remember, not just for buzzards, patience is a virtue. Patrick

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

With charming poems like this you should have no trouble getting a wife, Buzzard. only one thing, is that the only bird she can be;-)
Wonderful poem!

Eileen

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

Ray, the wish of many a man who trusts his fate to the stars.
You seem to have mastered the art of rhyme for a guy who claims
he's not a poet. -gene.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

For someone claiming not to be a poet you have just drop your act and came with a romantic tale that only a poet can dish with such perfection.

Georg

PS. I wished upon a star and got a singing cricket and a squeaky voiced mouse!

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

You capture the romantic longing so well. Very nice.

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

Ray,

A sweet, upbeat love poem with a familiar and catchy tune. Fantastic.

Mary

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

Magnificent! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Happy Canada Day; hope it was happy for you and your loved ones and friends! :D

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

WRITTEN SO WELL WITH THE PHRASES, IMAGERY AND RHYME CONVEYING THE YEARNINGS OF ONE SEEKING LOVE. ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE

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