Looking to the sunset, I'm intrigued by the awe of natures beauty. The setting sun seems to be disappearing into the oceans depths.
Never have I imagined so many shades of orange dancing on a rippling mirror. Quite a perfect place... A moment of serenity and solitude...
I take a deep cleansing breath. The gentle breeze and salt air give my senses a feeling of profound virgin purity. Total oblivion consumes me.
A large seagull stands over his dinner picking the remnants of what was once a horseshoe crab. A smaller, yet persistent, gull keeps taunting him, hoping to get his share.
Glancing back to the horizon, just as tints of orange begin taking on hues of purple, I realize the first stars of evening beginning to illuminate the sky.
Sitting on soft warm sand, heated by the setting sun, I close my eyes and try to imagine life without this kind of peace. A life without hope.
Perhaps future generations will sit on this very spot and witness all that is beautiful in the world. Maybe, just maybe they can say, ' I helped make it so.'
It is easy to see how this could be chosen for publication. I was drawn in completely by your words and it allowed me escape and respite for a while. Poetic mastery at its best. Congratulations
Chanti
Loved this write, Paul; so acutely observed and simply stated - and a real sense of the peace which you identify as the distillation of hope. We can feel so small when we commune with the largeness and grandeur of nature, and yet our sense of oneness with it and the way our lives are inextricably interwoven with it can bring on this deep feeling of harmony. And the desire and responsibility we can feel to perpetuate this for those who come after us is truly inspiring! "Tread softly upon this gentle earth and leave nothing behind you but steady footprints for others to follow..." KB
Paul...that's why I paint...I am so in love with nature.
As I read this I could just picture it all and now want
to go pick up my brush...You inspired me...this is lovely..
floria
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Chanti
Soothing piece, this is, Paul. . .
blessin's,
cynth'ya lewis reed
~Chrissie
that is being published, I can understand why. An outstanding poem. Bill
Nature is the most
awesome treasure that
is given to us...
If only everyone appreciated it's beauty
a little more....
Fantastic write...
Trixie :)
Reindeer
As I read this I could just picture it all and now want
to go pick up my brush...You inspired me...this is lovely..
floria
You've been missed! Excellent message in this one!
Nice to read you again!!
Missed you!!
Love Tinka
this lovely poem!
Always a pleasure........ty, Dani