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Haggard's Halls ( Part XVIII )
by Paul Berube → (All Poetry by Paul Berube)
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O walls you speak with tongue-in-cheek,
thy ramblings are for naught.
Before my soul grows dead and cold,
you'll feel the wrath I wrought.


Mine kin they weep, ne'er yours to keep,
while light of time grows dim.
It shall be told in print of bold,
tis nothing but a whim.


Thou thinks me weak, a rash critique,
I'll not be played the clown.
Let it be written, I am not smitten,
my best can bring thee down.

This land will bloom, above thy gloom,
in final protocol.
At judgement day you'll have no say,
when He rules Haggard's Halls.
 

 

 
 


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 Reviews of "Haggard's Halls ( Part XVIII )"
Reviewed by Helena Quinn (Reader)
Reviewed on May 2, 2008
Beautiful work! I love the rhythm and the rhyming patterns.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on April 28, 2008
I enjoy your poems of Haggard Halls. The flow is good ,andmessage profound......M

Reviewed on March 13, 2008
Good Morning Paul,
This Poetic express Is Fluid!! Very Very Smooth To The Read.
Its Beautiful how your words spoke!

Embrasse'
Vickie

Reviewed by Leann Marshall
Reviewed on March 3, 2008
Brings to mind a place torn by battle but as the smoke parts--its very soul remains. Beautiful writing.

Reviewed by Debra Baker
Reviewed on February 29, 2008
Paul, your pen is captivating, and the work magnificent. Not a flaw in your penmanship. Let me personally say, I think you are a brilliant Poet.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 28, 2008
Yes, the Board has said it! This is flawlessly constructed and so tight. And the energy within it is immense, like a coiled spring. Excellent, Paul. I particularly like those walls speaking tongue-in-cheek... guess they must be whispering into each other's ears! :)) Bless you, Kate xx

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on February 28, 2008
What a profound write indeed my friend...well done a poem penned with perfection.
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
Paul,
This poem is wonderfully written and should be in the textbooks for perfection in rhyme.

Thank you,

Jill

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
Paul,
I love the renegade tone of part 18! Haggard's Halls has had its way for generations and finally someone is ready to stand up and make some changes. I can't wait to see how this series unfolds in future parts. Excellent work and well worth the wait! Love and Hugs~
Sheila

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
Very profound and true, I especially like the last verse.

Pierre

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Spiritual words of truth for one to ponder over....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
AWESOME write, Paul!!! Well-said!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Wow! Truly an excellent poem, Paul. You are a fine writer. I wish I could write like this and the message, of course, spot on and classic. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
This is brilliant,,, Gosh,, wish you wrote more,,,, You are so very talanted,, Much enjoyed.
Love, Christine

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Splendid poem still one of my favorites Paul,a joy to read!

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Absolutely beautiful
love your choice of words Excellent tempo
However i wish I had read the other seven parts!
Stunning view of thoughts!!
Peace Love and hugssss...Morning Star


Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
love the rhythm and flow to your work!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
poem flows effortlessly ...

Reviewed by Kathy Kopp
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Paul, I haven't read the first 7 parts yet, but I like this one. Good personification.

Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Powerful thoughts Paul and perfect rhyme and flow.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Beautiful rhythm...beautiful rhyme...beautiful verse.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Very, very well done Paul. I like your style my friend. Be well and God bless.

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
You are a wonderful poet. Your style is superb.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Wonderful writing sweet man,enjoyed very much..stay safe and well...Hugssssss


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