In Your Shadow (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 9, 2008

Paul,
A profound and true lesson. I think easier said than done for most, too. When you don't love yourself, it's then that other people's love seems most important to you...you seek it, though you're not ready for it. The ending on this poem haunts one's thoughts! Love and Hugs~
Sheila

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

Hi Paul,
Another awesomw write...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Brittany Ren�e

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

Amongst the millions of reviews, I'm only a small bird to say congratulations on such an astounding piece. This deserves some major recognition, my friend.

Warm Love
*-Brittany-*

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

In such a short piece, this had a lot to say. Great work

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

beautifully expressed truths my friend

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

this is so true until you really know yourself how can you love another awesome jobon this

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

Paul this is without doubt one of my favorites of yours.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

beautifully expressed truths...excellent write Paul!

Reviewed by Leysa Lowery

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

Powerful write!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

This is outstanding Paul. One of your best, I think, that I've read so far.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

Until we intergrate ourselves we cannot be whole enough to share ourselves with another. This is a well written and deeply thought out poem, its truth is universal. Good job!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

the universe unfolds itself mysteriously...and question all we want...it makes us jump in and just live...

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

Wow..this is excellent Paul..the last two lines are powerful...floria

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

Deep thoughts expressed here and questions. Great write.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2003

True words for sure.