Chilling, ominous, and stay-inside-at-night imagery! I love when you write dark pieces. Actually, you can write anything. Your dark pieces come alive. I'm glad it's light out now or I'd have my blinds closed and I'd be wishing I had a silver-bullet gun. Excellent write, Paul! Love and Hugs.
Sheila
" The curse seeks refuge"
No matter which way I look at it, love, like a curse seeks refuge, lost love, longing love, dying love, love in anticipation, its all the same, and Damn it, it hurts.
and into the night the demons come...seeking the mind that opens to its wishes and punchuatine the dreams with answers. This is superb my friend.
Susan
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
Ooooo my Paul this is definitely a deep, dark, mysterious, haunting and passionate write...I love it!
~Nikki~
The quaint little town of Pinecrest in the mountains of Arizona faces its most harrowing challenge yet—a chilling murder that sends shockwaves through the community.
Marcus Lee, Pinecrest's newly appointed police chief, finds himself at the cente
Boom! Pain! Blackness!
After an RPG attack on their barracks in Afghanistan, corpsmen, Amber Fox, Luke Owens , Wade Scott and Ross Miller wake up in an Army hospital in Germany.
Thus, begins a months long recovery for all of them. A
Twenty-eight years ago, Stan Parker and Angela Carpenter broke off their engagement when each wanted to go their separate ways.
Stan became a sheriff’s deputy, married a dispatcher, and had a daughter. His wife died 7 years ago leaving him l
Sheila
No matter which way I look at it, love, like a curse seeks refuge, lost love, longing love, dying love, love in anticipation, its all the same, and Damn it, it hurts.
Genius you are Paul.
Ch'erie
blood sucker
The vampiress
Good horrible poem Paul
Gem
Reindeer
Susan
~Nikki~
Amor
Very mysterious write! Many layers underneath those wounds!
Hugs,
Maria
Love
Tinka
Great Write!
tony
This is excellent.
Powerful finale verses.
Goodmorning so nice your back
Peggy
Dark, profound and haunting. An excellent poem.
~Chrissie
How dark .
How intense .
Nice work .
Great poem, made me gasp and shiver!
Sandie Angel / May Lu :o)