Searching For Tomorrow (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 27, 2003

Paul,
This is the best stuff I've read in a long while. I must've sat here for 30 minutes as my mind reeled with each separate thought.

This ROCKS.

Thank you,
Tami

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

The third strophe longers, but oh, Paul - that last one ties the poem together and sends one off with an icy chill. Wonderful . . . as always!

I've missed your writing; I need to check in more often.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Kinda sweeny Todd-ish, love it

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Very profound Paul,I really liked this poem it has good message.

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Excellent write!

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)

Reviewed on October 24, 2003

understanding the nature of an event after it has happened and wishing it could be changed....hindsight! or dreaming of an exciting future.....what would happen if we could. If we cant dream and fantasize we arnt human.
Apart from which, there is nothing in my head but dreams and fantasies.
Loved the spark this provoked.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on October 24, 2003

I agree with that bit Dana picked out..My God Awesome indeed. Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

Paul...brilliant work....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

Great write! Very deep and introspective!

Reviewed by Lee Ennis

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

This is great, Paul! I love this, "We become slaves to our fantasies
in a world that can not accept
truth but revels in it's intent."

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

Paul, this is really good. I can't decide which stanza I like best so I picked 2, no wait 3. Oh hell the whole thing is great.
~ Sara

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

We become slaves to our fantasies
in a world that can not accept
truth but revels in it's intent."
Paul, this is strength... This reminds me of a quote... "The road to hell is paved with good intentions"..... excellent write of wisdom... stay strong.
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

Paul I love the entire poem but oh that last verse...fantastic work here..floria

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

Deep emotive write Paul!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

A sage message in this excellent write Paul!Has the ring of proverbs!;-)

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

Profound statement and a powerful write!

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

Food for thought Paul...

Excellent write...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

wow
that last stanza!
wow!
well done!! Oh that sounds like meat talk! LOL
sorry
lol
pax
A

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

Excellent Paul, this was outstanding, I loved this,

Reindeer

Reviewed by L M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

Excellent emotions Paul!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

Wow, now that is a little jewel of wisdom, enjoyed this Paul.

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

Deep... yet I understood the meaning... WONDERFUL Superb write my friend!!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

Profound thoughts..you've piched my brain Paul! Great work.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

I like my butcher, he gives me the best cuts of meat, I buy whole tenderloins and he cuts them perfectly. I found tomorrow under the cushion in my favorite chair, where I fall asleep like a fat lion after feeding.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 23, 2003

Deep thoughts expressed here. Very haunting. Great write.