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Clouded Eyes

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Thursday, October 21, 2004

The day, soft gray,
with clouds a’play,
wouldn’t let down her rainy gown.

The wait, long gray,
led thoughts astray,
while teasing eyes flitted by like flies.

The noon, blue-gray,
winked and passed away,
racing clouds flocked, no longer blocked.

Mid-day, dark gray,
mind and eyes rain-flayed,
thunder-drops make heartbeat – stop.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 10/21/04
   


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Reviewed on October 23, 2004
(((erin)))

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! this one literally took my breath away--WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :0

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on October 22, 2004
A beautiful soaking with a stormy climax, Erin!
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 22, 2004
Awesome imagery Erin!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2004
Beautiful storm song here.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 22, 2004
Erin,
Your imagery was awesome. You had me walking in the wake of the storm.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
love the variations of gray and that end, too. solid write.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
Wonderful descriptions!

Reviewed on October 21, 2004
Excellent write Erin
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed on October 21, 2004
Beautifully done, excellent imagery!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
As always from you Erin, a beautiful picture painted of Nature...Ed

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
Beautiful!

Reviewed by J. Pajot
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
Sounds like Autumn here in South Eastern Virginia...beautiful and peacefully haunting...best of all things to you, M'Lady.

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
PRETTY


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