As brightness retired
I acknowledge the chill around me
Cooing like a ringdove in mud
Laughing and ruffling my head
Like a frogs who from the slime my entrapment
You who turn hills and stars to rhyme
You said…
You sunshine talk and cry to much… go wash your face
When heaven dissolves in falling rain
But then came floating over the valley
Even in this battle it was heard
Blue Bird of love songs…did not stop
Drinking from the tender nipples of the stars
As darkness touches the sky by night
Clumsy you flap your tender wings
With wings burning like the sun
Embracing my heart
Cooing like ringdoves in mud
Love songs of blue
About other lovers grrrrr….
Oh blue bird of love
I love you…
Why?
Because…
You where send by God!!
I love the way you mingle nature throughout your poetry Tinka. It really gives depth to your words. Shows how everything is connected. Hope all is well. ~ Sara
The bluebird is a wonderfulmetaphor for love, Tinka. Unfortunately, the one in yur picture is about to dissect a poor, little, defenseless insect. ;-). Love, Ron.
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2004
If he is sent from a heavenly source, then he should not be
writing poetry "about other lovers, grrrrr."
Another image-filled piece of romantic expression, Tinka!
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi Benyehu (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2004
"The Bird of Love" sings it all with harmony on the cadence of imagery. A striking heart piece of beauty.
Sixty-seven days after departing Flores Island in Europe’s westernmost waters, the schooner Heimdall and her stalwart crew has finally arrived at the mysterious Isla Socorro in the Revillagigedo Archipelagoes. The discoveries they make are astounding
Poetess c'est magnifique - beautiful my friend, stunningly beautiful!!
Best to you,
Robert
as always, you never fail to satisfy
the reads expectations.
excellent write
William ...peace
blessin's
c.
writing poetry "about other lovers, grrrrr."
Another image-filled piece of romantic expression, Tinka!
I salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Tommy
Beautifully penned and wonderful sentiments voiced.
Well done Tinka.
hugs and love
Elga
So beautiful . . .
Sandie May Angel
Peter