Maybe I did not treat you kind
But no love will I ever find… again
That will make me blind
With tears of love
I want you to know sweetheart
Where ever I go
My heart belongs to you
I know there are more kinds of love
God may take you away before he takes me
But remember…
Whichever way we might go
My love will stay part of you
Every blink of the eye
Or an angel’s sigh
Will be a token of my love for you
Baby never feel sorry for being part of me
You are a gift from….God
That came into my life
You made me feel again… love again
You saved my heart from dying
Oh!! I still do cry… that ain’t no lie
It just shows my most inner emotions
And the surety my heart does not lie
If I had a choice
Of where I would be right now
Or even the day I have to die…
It would be in your arms
And when ever it is your time to go
I want you to know I will be there with you
I would love to hold you in my arms
And have the privilege
To die with you
Tinka, very touching letter...
"And when ever it is your time to go
I want you to know I will be there with you
I would love to hold you in my arms
And have the privilege
To die with you " - this is truly selfless love.
A most warm and sincere write if I have ever read one
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2004
This touches the heart and soul. Fantastic write.
Reviewed by CHRIS CYR (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2004
dearest tinka,
this poem is so beautiful.i'm making a copy to give to my husband who is in hospital with an amputation.i sure hope that is alright with you.we've been married 36 years and he rescued me from extreme abuse.i love your poetry....chris cyr
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2004
A slice of heartbreaking pleadings, in lovely prose!
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2004
Tinka, when you write from your inner soul, there is an aura of real pain, beautifully penned, sincerely felt. You are a multi-sensitive woman. Your internal rhyme never ceases to impress me. katy xox.
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Powerful and truly hearfelt, and I certainly trust that the love is reciprocated dear friend. Stunning write from the heart.
warm hugs and love
Elga
"You are a gift from….God
That came into my life
You made me feel again… love again
You saved my heart from dying"
Thanks.
"And when ever it is your time to go
I want you to know I will be there with you
I would love to hold you in my arms
And have the privilege
To die with you " - this is truly selfless love.
Amy
Carmen :-)
jeanne
TRASK
You saved my heart from dying
Wow!
SueB
Exceptional piece..
Love
Peter
Written with great depth and emotion, this prose is of charming beauty - a grand piece!!
Robert
Such a commitment is rare, ms Tinka!
this poem is so beautiful.i'm making a copy to give to my husband who is in hospital with an amputation.i sure hope that is alright with you.we've been married 36 years and he rescued me from extreme abuse.i love your poetry....chris cyr