“When No Sun Shines’
Dawn breaks within her eyes
Dividing her tears…with a bitter smile
Ache within her heart pushing their tides
From the cloudy basis of her life
Heaven and hell shows upon her face
Twisted shapes and thoughts deep within
Winter breaks through her eyes
So many times her heart was drained
Her mind dead
Her broken voice shudders…
Trying to speak
Trying to say those words
That casting the shadow upon her face
Each truth
Each lie
Each hurt
Death strike her heart so often
As rain fall from her eyes
Looking where no sun shines
Darkness for the last time
Hoping…
When will the sun shine stay!!
When will the hurt go away…?
And leave her with a smile upon her face
And a little joy within her heart
Copyright ©2004 Tinka Boukes
All rights reserved; and may not be
reproduced in any way without permission from the author.
I agree with Sara's review. That is something we all have to learn. Not an easy lesson, but possible.
love
Ian
Beautifully written poem, but I hear the sadness and longing, have faith and love will shine so bright again soon.
warm hugs and love
Elga
superb piece..
Vesna oxoxo
pax A
:(
let the sun shine through
If I say Follow your heart,
you will follow pain
let your tears
stop the rain
let the sun shine through.
William .... peace
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Try It That Sun Will Shine Thru-And As Long as You Accept What Goes Round Comes Around You Like Me--I Do Collect Big Time,Heads Asses Will RollRevenge Is Mine_
I Will Share Very Little $$$ If Anything To Or With Anybody_
1st I'll Help Little Black N White Children Make Their Sun Shine Too!
Credit for The Write!
TRASK
strongly written, emotional piece :( beautiful art and verse--that grip the reader in your feelings--BRAVA! hope better days are here soon *for both of us*
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
Reindeer
Agree with Eileen below..
Heaven is the calling card you await...
Love
Peter
A sadness that has been intricatly woven into this beautifully written poetic masterpiece - superb!
Robert
Excellent write Tinky!
last question... when heaven calls;-)!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D
Susan