“Knowing”
This night comes down in slow degrees
Knowing
All untimely questions will arise
It will ruffle the temper of many
To sour my thoughts
And spoil my vision
With one foot on a banana peel
The other in my mouth
As the sad song of the lonely bird
Will sing along with me
Happy tunes there will never be
Casting your blazing eyes at me
As the night come down on me
Knowing
We can never be
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A deeply emotive, powerful write, as only you can deliver with such excellence ... superb!!
Best to you,
Robert
Great write.
"one foot on a banana peel, the other in my mouth," is
indeed priceless!
Sad and beautiful write. Love the picture.
P.S. - Good poem...lol.
Hi Tinka, thanks so much for commenting on me daughters post
She is excited with all the comments.
Love ya!love the picture of you there.........
:)
things changeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
trust me :)
Better days will come...and the sun will rise again in the morning Tinka...
Peter
NEVER say never, everything can be if you are just positive and work towards a goal. Don't let insignificant little issues break you down. Be positive and make it REAL....
warm hugs
Elga
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