Take Me (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 16, 2004

Remember all the good in me

Don't you ever forget it either, Tinky!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on December 16, 2004

This was so beautiful, like a song, lovely Tinka!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on December 16, 2004

This is what we call here in OZ " A you beaut write" Tink you have penned a masterpiece, good onya mate.
Love Ch'erie

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 15, 2004

riding the emotional tides in this one ...

Reviewed by Rebecca Burns (Reader)

Reviewed on December 15, 2004

That was wonderful, thank you. Rebecca

Reviewed by D May (Reader)

Reviewed on December 15, 2004

Tinka--your words are left lingering in this write. Very profound thoughts in this.

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on December 15, 2004

Tinka,

"Take Me" is a true poetic treasure - speaks of inner feelings and soulfulness ... exceptional!!

Keep the faith,

Robert

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on December 15, 2004

Lovely write Tinka.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on December 15, 2004

Another beautiful poem that is set well to music. I love the sea also.

Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)

Reviewed on December 15, 2004

Beautiful!!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on December 15, 2004

breathtaking poetry and pic, tinka; this is too beautiful! well done; enjoyed so much~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D

Reviewed by James Daniels

Reviewed on December 15, 2004

Well done. I can say that you truly did grab me and make me want to read more. Kepp up the great work.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on December 15, 2004

Tinka, this is a well crafted poem of hopelessness; which I hope, like the others have asked, is just poetry. I think you need a balloon ride to cheer you up. Hope all is well? ~ Sara

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on December 15, 2004

Whatever the intent of this poem, I hope that whatever pain you, or another may (or may not, might be just your musings)be going through, that you (or them) can work through it. I think you are a great writer, and have learned much from you. Thank you for sharing this.
-George

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on December 15, 2004

Whoa!
Tinka...self esteem! Self esteem!!!
I don't know if I am reading this wrong, but it sounds like someone who has given up on everthing.......God will set you free, but not thru death........he gives strength...........

Don't them them get you down!
you are better than that!!!
This write scares me ms tinka.........

I hope i read it wrong........I hope i missed the message, because the message I got was so depressing and sad...........
my goodness.......
do you have a trusted person to talk to???/

be well.......be positive and be brave........if my review is off the mark.......just delete it and my apologies for my confusion........

pax
A
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Take me to the shore