My Wounded Heart (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2005

Tinka Wow! Are you married to my hubby too? <Not a funny there.

Such a powerful message in here although personal, it's great strong poem.

I'm sorry Tinka. I know how you feel. I truly do.
Love Traceyxo (C:)

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on March 30, 2005

Oh my, don't know how giving someone flowers and a card, can equate to buying attention. That's the first time I've heard such nonsense.
I hope things get better real soon.

Take care

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on March 30, 2005

Oh Tinky, I feel so sad for you.
You have nothing to feel disgraceful for.
I wish you brighter days you deserve.
You must believe in you, I know there
are plenty of people who do, I DO!
Hugs
Dale

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 30, 2005

Far too terribly sad, Tinka - and your poetic heart and soul truly pours off this page.

Truly wishing you far far brighter days, my friend.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

A heartbreaking write Tinka....you deserve so much more..
Hugs, Carole

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

Tinka, Happy Anniversary to you!! You deserve to be proud of yourself for doing your absolute best to try to mend the bridges that keep the two of you living on different islands. There comes a time, though, when enough is enough and we just need to understand that this lifetime is too short to waste it all on someone who will never understand how very special and precious we truly are. I think that tomorrow, you should take those 30 roses into town and walk down the street giving them to people who look like they could use a kind gesture...soon, what your husband has shunned will make you feel so good, special and worthy of happiness as you celebrate life.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

I bet if you had let the day go by, unobserved, he would have been miffed........you cannot please some people tinka..........
he should have been giving you the gifts..........
guys suck!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

Sadly You Are Not The Evil One Tinka,i.e. YOU JUST GOTTA MAKE UP YOUR MIND--Put Your Foot Down--Say STOP--NO MORE_

It Is Better To Live Alone In Peace(Solitude) Than To Live Together In (Pain) Your Own 2 Each Created Holy Hell...

Your Friend,TRASK

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

(((TINKA)))

Heartbreaking...I'm sorry he doesn't know what he has right in front of him. :( *tears*

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Powerfully, poignantly, passionately expressed hurt :(

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

Oh... what else to say... he doesn't know, what he has lost... on my sobriety anniversary, my wife always gives me roses... it is one gift, I truly love... I'll pray for him, that he will find out how stupid he is and what he has lost and I'll pray for you, that your heart will heal and love will find its way...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

Cut off the petals and stick 30 rose stems up his........

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

Ah Tinka, he does not deserve such a person as you, this is heartbreaking, I pray you find the strength to go on without him,

Reindeer

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

poignant read, I am sad for you

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

No Jerry....two cases of beer would've been a better choice....and a house filled with whore..not his wife and kids...and a kind request to stop drinking...because he is killing every person in his life...himself included!!
We asked him because we cared..but all I can say now is F*CK him!!

Love Tinka The Evil One ;(

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

Well sis, I don't know about the "evil one and loose lips" moniker's but dump them, and if 30 years gets you a wounded heart, maybe you should dump him too! At least your poetry is still superb!;-)Write it out Lady!!!

Love and Hugs
Eileen

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

Maybe if you would have bought him a set of tools, that would have softened him up.

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

So sorry, Tinka. Can relate. Last of the great romantics. Tho you can't see it, my heart breaks with you...

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

So sad Tinka, so sad. I can relate to this myself except the years are a few less and Wedding day never was sweet, no matter how much I tried. some do not deserve the love we shopwer on them.

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

Tinka,

My deepest and most heartfelt blessings my wonderful friend ... your writes are always from the heart ... brilliant work!!

Best to you,

Robert

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

Tinka, have missed reading you even though poems like this make my heart break -- probably because I can relate to the general experience. Next time, give the roses to yourself. I did that once and it was a beautiful, beautiful thing. And, btw, you are not evil, so what's with the "evil one" moniker? Dawn

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

Tinka, my heart goes out to you and I hope he somehow has a reason that has been overlooked, thirty years is a long time to love and be loved so I hope he manages to find the way to make up for such a cruel hurt. Regardless your friends here on the den care.

Felix

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

he doesh't deserve flowers or your tears tinka

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

I understand. Boy, that bloke needs to be careful before he loses a good thing. :-) Nordette

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

Hugs so sorry your having such a rough time.

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

So much pain and heartache, Tinka=0(. I am sorry. Haven't been able to comment on your work last few days...life things getting in the way, but I always enjoy your work. Just commented on someone else's that it's when we write from the heart, or the gut if you will, that we do our best work...just my opinion. Some try to think it through too much instead of just letting those keys cut loose. You write what you feel and it shows. Wonderful poem.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

A tear filled poem of a heart that has been broken and patched up one too many times.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

(((((((((((((((HUGS))))))))))))))))))

i am so sorry you are having such a hard day; you are in my prayers!

with much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :( >tears <