Wait 'till he finds out lust doesn't last forever - or does it? Put on your dancing shoes and go get another one without the roving eye. Practice makes perfect!

I understand you all too well...but Sherry's right about this.
He was the one who walked away and left you behind, broken and dead.
Hope you are okay by now.
Love
Amira

well done

always a thief around Tink, got to lock your goodies up hehe

Quite powerful, Tinka; and quite sad. And believe it or not, this happens to both sexes far too often.

Talk about right between the eyes. "Harlot" is a word that would add a lot to the descriptions here of what this describes. Wow,

Be at peace for if the man leaves a good thing, that is his loss and the grieving woman's secret blessing.

Great musical match with this, piercing!
cynth'ya lewis reed

Wow Tinka...powerful write, now move on, I did!

Peace and love, Carole

The most tragic part, is he was the one who walked away. It is so much easier to blame the other woman in these situations because we don't have the loving feelings for her that we have for that dog of a cheating man whom we gave our soul to. She is nothing more than an excuse, if not her, he would have gone with another. He is the poison in the wine not the pittiful excuse that he strayed with. A strong and emotional write which I can identify with. Thankfully I had the ability and courage to walk away from him and go on to find worthy men to whom I have been a precious gem.

Take care,

Sherry

Why won't other people respect other people's mates?
I have always hated with perfect hatred those who cheat !
This poem is great because it expresses the feelings to
the slut, man or woman, who is driven by desire and no
concern for others.
Well Done Kid!

Rich Criso Suarez

Powerful write... to be abandoned and recognize what the other has lost, after the hate and pain have left, leaves us with power...

Tinka,

WOW. Remind me not to get on your bad side *chuckling nervously* Damn...you don't get mad, you get EVEN! Strongly emotional, intense write--very well executed. Um...er...yeah. VERY good!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Wow Tink! Its powerful!

Damn HIM really - not worth the tears nor the fight. Life goes on!

God bless,

Sandie.

Wow like the graphic this one is cutting edge Tink and the passion of hatred and despair jumps from the words like a grasshopper from a blade of grass. Unerving to say the least, but wonderful stuff.

Felix

Wow Tinka, I guess she ought to stay out of your way and like Andy said he prob wasn't worth it.

Paul;-}

Yikes Tinka...you know what they say about a woman's scorn.

This is dark poetry taken to it's ultimate, Tinka. Shattered emotion and twisted despair. Brava!

Beautiful write Tinka. My compliments

A hard one Tinka! He couldn't have been worth much if he let himself be taken! If this is personal, hope you're over him! Excellent write on the topic!

Love,
Eileen

Men ain't worth it Tinks. If he goes off.
You can't hurry love, as Ms Ross said..

powerful write, tinka; hope you are okay!! well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :(