Dancing Fantasy (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Searching for fulfillment

Driven

By a wild crazy urge

Of intense pleasure
Rising inside of me

Crying out for release

That awaits us

The engorged heat of the moment

The involuntarily flexing

And the swelling of�
Muscles that tightens and flexes

With deep intense pleasure inside
Oh we are one with the universe now

As we evaporate into the atmosphere

Rising together

Like a tidal bore

Pleasure overcomes us

In one gigantic

Spasm of love

Copyright � 2005 Tinka Boukes

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on August 10, 2005

Dear Tinks,

Well done, superb and very passionate indeed. A wonderful write Tinka.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on August 1, 2005

Wow! Hot, passionate write this one Tink's

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Bob Holt (Reader)

Reviewed on August 1, 2005

Beautiful work. Is it hot in here or is it this poem? I'll be headed to that cold shower now.

Bob H

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 1, 2005

Excellently passionate Tinka, This is so very good!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 1, 2005

You romantic you !
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on July 31, 2005

Wow....we all need a cold shower after that steamy write, now there is a dance I would like often!

Love, Carole

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on July 31, 2005

Now that is a hot dance! I have a feeling that a few men here wouldn't mind if you shared more of your fantasies with them. No need to ask how you are doing. I can see from this poem you are doing purrrfeeeect. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 31, 2005

Damn, now I got to take a cold shower, and here I thought I would try not to shower for a whole month...though my neighbors probably thank you, Tinka...;) Ed

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on July 31, 2005

YiKkkkkes, T- as I said earlier to you...What a poem- To touch the innersoul- and the outerbeing--- I feel so sooooooooothed- Love your PaSSion Lady T- and YOu are feeling somewhat satisfied now~? right : )
I know I am--- hee,hee---Kekepin' comin' Reading this one, your groin just throb-throb and throb,--- WArmly,Sheeeoxo

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on July 31, 2005

I think I need a few momwnts with myself after reading this hot, passionate poem, Tinka! Excellent!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 31, 2005

Beautiful......

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 31, 2005

Ah as we discussed beautiful heart-touching and soul stirring write that says so very very much about love and loving. Thank you Tink.
Felix

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)

Reviewed on July 31, 2005

Your passionate expressing Love in it's ardent
naked truth of the realest human nature
is absolutely sensational.
Love your work Tinka
Peace and happy life',
Rich Criso Suarez

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 31, 2005

one with the universe now
As we evaporate into the atmosphere

What a way to go!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 31, 2005

Got any fags?

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on July 31, 2005

Oh my, it's time for some lovemaking I'd say. Too bad I'm alone. lol

This is lovely Tinka

Take care

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 31, 2005

Wonderful pic and poem to intensify the love contained therein. I couldn't read this poem until I had finished singing the song you added. How I wish I could relive those moments once again. Hold me, hold me............

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 31, 2005

Wow! oo la la! You have the den men at your
beck and call big cat Tinka;-)!heehee

Eileen

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on July 31, 2005

I enjoyed this better with the music turned down and the heat of your words turned up:-) Like riding on a cosmic rollercoaster of passion from the moon to the stars. Can't help but love it:-)

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on July 31, 2005

The horizontal Mambo draped in artistic words.

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on July 31, 2005

yeah, what dose guys said!

a real scorcher

good write!

j+

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 31, 2005

uffa!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 31, 2005

Whew!