After the shipwreck off all surety Years of living in a bitter taste of hell Quiet between walls of black mirrors That makes this place look even bigger Shallow very shallow hope I have In a bed of gray scared to death Without any answers and distracted Why human beings can be playing Such a ferocious game at …… Then a sudden suspicion awakes Comes out of the dark watching me Gray mirrors in shadow glowing And a light comes out of nowhere Short and bleak glowing in glass Tumbling down to the floor In a deep downward movement Glowing dance in the shape of an animal Looking at me with eyes of red Yellow the grin on its face Nose damp and tongue dripping In drops of silvery lust With a breath that smells like ether Horns sharp like a spear He was in charge of my soul His name was “I Wonder” He came to scare me once more Like the cat in his closet I had nothing to fear at all Because it was only an illusion The ghost animal in my mirror Was Only "You" Boo!!
Deep, provocative and very well written, lots to think about. Hopefully the ghost is no longer able to frighten you, and you in turn can scare it ;) Take care Tinks
Romantic wit-suspense depicted in the
“Room Of Mirrors And The Big Bad Wolf”,
under the rhythm of the drums of imagination poetizing the
arcane of the mind to deliver a masterpiece,
named, “Room Of Mirrors And The Big Bad Wolf”.
From a writing par excellence I have enjoyed an inspiring
reading through the lines of
“Room Of Mirrors And The Big Bad Wolf”.
Really well done Tinka,
this is something like what I tried to do with my
poem The Imfamous Beast.
But only two got that it was supposed to be funny in the end.
oh well, can't win em all
You've however pulled it off.
great work
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2005
lol. Well done.
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Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2005
Naw, you didn't "get" me, Tinka, I ducked. Just in time too.
Wow! we are almost on the same page today;-) funny how humour and scare are opposite sides of the smae coin just like love and apathy.
Great write Tinka! Must be a lot of mirrors in that castle;-)
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Deep, provocative and very well written, lots to think about. Hopefully the ghost is no longer able to frighten you, and you in turn can scare it ;) Take care Tinks
warm hugs and love
Elga
Ron
Regis
Paul;-)
Peace and love, Carole
Love & Light,
Joseph
cool poem!
Romantic wit-suspense depicted in the
“Room Of Mirrors And The Big Bad Wolf”,
under the rhythm of the drums of imagination poetizing the
arcane of the mind to deliver a masterpiece,
named, “Room Of Mirrors And The Big Bad Wolf”.
From a writing par excellence I have enjoyed an inspiring
reading through the lines of
“Room Of Mirrors And The Big Bad Wolf”.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Really well done Tinka,
this is something like what I tried to do with my
poem The Imfamous Beast.
But only two got that it was supposed to be funny in the end.
oh well, can't win em all
You've however pulled it off.
great work
neverseenthatcastlebutitdoeslooklikeharlockhey theaussiesmaygohomecosthebombs
That makes this place look even bigger
It sure does look mighty big in that picture, Tinky - and is that the Tinky Flag flying over your castle?!
Great write Tinka! Must be a lot of mirrors in that castle;-)
Love
Eileen
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D
you are always in my prayers and thoughts!
enjoyed much
thanks ....Tinka
Love & Peace.......William
You got me, too. What a compelling, chilling write--effectively penned brilliance!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
FElix