Perfect Emptiness" (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on August 21, 2005

Well... I am probably not the right person to give advice. I also don't manage to find the person that is worth my love.
But Tinka - we should never give up hope. Let's keep on hoping and praying and looking around. How many men are on this earth? There should be Mr. Right for us somewhere.
Love
Amira

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on August 10, 2005

Dear Tinks,

So filled with heartache this write. Don't allow it to become empty Tinks, you have so much to offer and give. Sometimes in life situations are not perfect, but patience and perseverance make it all worth while.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

I can feel the emotional pain that you put in each word in this sad, haunting write Tinks!

love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

A sad poem, Tinka! You have described the sadness and the emptiness so well. You are getting so good with this kind of poem.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by M Flack

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

A poignant and painful tribute to love. Deeply felt in each word...

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 7, 2005

you express your emotion very vividly in this spectacular write ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 6, 2005

This is outstwnding in its dark rhythms which beat within each of us.
Excellent poem Tinka!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on August 6, 2005

Sounds like dark matrimony.

This thing call love can take one down many paths, some unpleasant.

Pen on lady penner

xoxoxo

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 6, 2005

A picture perfect evening
posted
excellent write

William .....Peace & Love

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 6, 2005

Deep and dark. Great write!

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on August 6, 2005

Tinka, this poem is perfect. If it's not your single best poem to date, it is definitely one of the top, top. You reached in deep and pulled out a story, delivered in few words, that so many of us battle with on a daily basis, but are ill-equiped to communicate with such eloquence. See Tinka, I knew you would understand: you and I are both trapped in a block of ice.

Can you tell, I really liked this poem? LOL....~ Sara

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on August 6, 2005

Tinka, your poem is superb

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 6, 2005

As always Tink your work is like silk drifting down on a puff of a breeze, delicate and heartwarming but always with just the right amount of sad bittersweet memoried of what was or what could have been. Sweet....
Felix

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 6, 2005

A truly cold and dark piece, Tinka - and I hope it warms up soon for you.

PS Thanks for almost liking that spider!!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on August 6, 2005

Yep, Gotta Stand Your Ground Til Death Do Us Part--Right On Write On!

TRASK

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 6, 2005

A very emotional write.

Reviewed by Elaine Carey

Reviewed on August 6, 2005

Enigmatic and mysterious, you paint some evocative emotional pictures here. Well done!