Flirting Sun (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Dream in darkness fades away

As time of sorrow falls away

Upon the final flames of day

That feeds upon the heart

Dark sky� wind the only song

But yet a good old friend

As dreams of darkness pass away

The glorious light of night will stay

As stars above

Now gently

Shine

Copyright � 2005 Tinka Boukes
All Rights Reserved

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on November 6, 2005

There is a certain sadness to the sun going down.

Ron

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on November 2, 2005

Absolutely beautiful Tinka...

love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on November 2, 2005

Tinka,

Beautiful photo and poem. Always great to take a few moments from our busy lives to appreciate our surroundings.

Reviewed by Shoma Mittra

Reviewed on November 2, 2005

oh so lovely Tinka...the write , the picture and the soundtrack :-) shoma

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on November 1, 2005

Wonderful Tinka. Very serene, peaceful. ~ Sara

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 1, 2005

a wonderful view and a beautiful poem, Tinka ...

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on November 1, 2005

Excellent...

Just Think How Many Humans Believe They'll Still Be Here To See Sun Only Millions WILL Find Themselves In There Own mourning,i.e They Do Not Even Give It a Thought...

TRASK

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on November 1, 2005

What a lovely piece...soothing and gentle...great job Tinka! Love, Michelle

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 1, 2005

Nicely done tinks. Great shot too...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 1, 2005

I love it when the descriptions move me and this one did. Nothing like a dusk or dawn sunrise, sunset. Gotta love it.

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on November 1, 2005

nicely done.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on November 1, 2005

You got me!! A picture of dawn and a poem of dusk - that's a flirty peek-a-boo for sure, Teasy Tink! And the music - well, though it's lashing down English rain here tonight, certainly "Here Comes The Sun", Hon!! May it be a Tequila Sunrise for you tomorrow at 0600, too! Wish I could join you... LOL Kate. Really happy and evocative poem, too, that engenders Feel-Good, Dr. xx

Reviewed by Tina Clark

Reviewed on November 1, 2005

Aww Sis, Gf how very pretty! I could see and feel this one! Wonderful read!

Hugs
XO
Tina

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)

Reviewed on November 1, 2005

Tinka, You are indeed a bright shining artistic star!
peace and joy your way!
Rich Criso

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 1, 2005

No star shines as bright as our Tinka. The pic is breathtaking.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on November 1, 2005

thanks for sharing your sun Tink, have a sunshine day