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Awesome Pain
by Tinka Boukes → (All Poetry by Tinka Boukes)
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“Awesome Pain”


Let me be understood…
As to understand why!!

You looked me in the eye
And those awesome eyes shine
You touched my soul
And that was an awesome feeling
You piss me off
That causes awesome pain
You explain to me why!!
And that brought a awful lot of tears 
You made my head spin at 160
Oh!! What an awesome feeling
Just to tell me “sorry”
This is not the time for this shit
Now you gone and left me
With this awesome worry!!
Till I see you again… tears
Searching and hoping… gone
Till I find you by luck… smiling
You looked me in the eye once again
And T
……...H
………..A
………….T is an awesome feeling too
And you pissed me off once again
And I pissed you off… silly me!!
All in the name
Of Love
Please forgive me!!
And now you don’t mail me
And I shed a tear
And I…
Die
…S
……L
………O
…………W
……………L
………………Y
Now you have my heart in your hands!!
And that is not So Awesome…. it hurts!!
Handle “sorrow” as I put the roof on fire!!
Know I always loved you without a doubt!!
With this… awesome pain within my heart!!
A----W----E----S----O----M----E--!!
……………………K
………………………A
…………………………Y
……………………………!!


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 Reviews of "Awesome Pain"
Reviewed by m w
Reviewed on December 7, 2005
Love, Hate, Pain and Joy.... all kin to one another when our hearts are engaged

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on December 2, 2005
you left trask speechless...some task in itself tinks

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 2, 2005
Quite creative, Tinky, but again, quite sad.

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on December 2, 2005
Tinks, this is a totally Awesome! A sad but lovely write all the same.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 2, 2005
Tinks your writes just somehow keep getting better and better..Honing those natural talents.. brilliantly said..

Reviewed by Dan Rains (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2005
A bit different perhaps, but a good expression of how painful love can be. Shame it has to be that way.
Dan

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on December 1, 2005
What Can I Say!

TRASK

Reviewed by Steve Patterson
Reviewed on December 1, 2005
i liked the presentation on this. well done.
cowboy

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on December 1, 2005
I have to agree, love can be a pain. You always manage to have fun with your writes, even when you try to express your pain. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2005
Getting a little c-r-e-a-t-i-v-e are we? Gotta love it.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 1, 2005
Beautiful Tinka, lovelywrite.

\Felix

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on December 1, 2005
Love is an enigma..when new it glows fiercely, and then fades away
like the morning dew.
Lovely piece Tinka !
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2005
Very clever ending, great write.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 1, 2005
Love the instrumental music to this write, it offers some hope for the forlorn.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 1, 2005
Tinka your creativity shines in this poem, as does your never
ending tale of love. Ahhhlove sweet love, who really knows it!
Hope one day you do for true!;-)

(when in doubt try try again(:

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 1, 2005
Nighty-Night to all my readers and friends...time for me to do a

horizontal parking!!

Love Tinka


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