House” Wife {Betrayal} (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Alex Nodopaka

Reviewed on April 4, 2006

in the picture
are you on the left
or the right

lol

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on April 3, 2006

nice slap in the face for those who don't appreciate their women the way they should. You go, girl!

Reviewed by David Young

Reviewed on March 30, 2006

Very stong stuff here, great delivery, and message.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

Heartbreaking write Tinks, one that only you can work through...when you are ready to...
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

Better a house wife than a whore for life...Ed

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

Powerful, pain-tinged write, as only you can do; sadness definitely drips from your pen today! Very well done! You are in my prayers, darlin'!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :( >tears <

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

Very Sadly this is on the mark!
It is a stigma for a woman who performs 100% as a wife and 200% as a mother...cleans,cooks and serves her family and is just a "house Wife". In a wordsmith frame of mind to be a mate of the house is degrading. I guess I'm just a modern woman.
Susan

Reviewed by richard poor

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

who could put such an existence into such beauty....you!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

(((Tinka)))

This one hurts...emotional write, borne from experience. You're in my heart and prayers.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Danielle Mundy

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

lord have mercy Tink! I can relate to this a little too well :( BIG HUGS.

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

tinks,

aa fine write

insightful and evocative

well done

john+

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

This one is sad Tinka cause it is all too often true. Sometimes it is done unintentionally but others it is just done out of spite but either way it ruins a life and a love of someone who doesn't deserve it.
Felix

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

Oh Tinka, my heart cries for you! Such a beautiful write for this poem of betrayal. I hope it comes out for your best sis! Keep the faith!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

This is indeed a painful read, but so very well penned! The picture is great too.
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

Ouch, Tinka, ouch! Painful read, yet so well expressed!

Reviewed by Hariharan Balakrishnan

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

This is evocative poetry- written straight from the heart. Good poetry.

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

Bitter fruit, hard to swallow...

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

Gripping story all too common today.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

Not much I can, or want,, to say about this. You'll work it out.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

This is a painful read, Tinka
Tha act of betrayal is a tough one to bear, it's how you deal with it that counts ..:)
I hope and pray that you are alright !
Harrowing picture ..
Love
Peter