Bad Place (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 22, 2008

Tinka,

A very strong and intense write . . . blessings always!

Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

I have been there my friend. A classy way to describe a depressed moment!

Reviewed on July 8, 2006

Get out of that place in a hurry.

Perhaps Chrissy is on to something with the cookies and milk.
Don't forget to dip them in the milk. They taste better than way.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on July 8, 2006

A very bad place indeed,you describe it just as it is,I was there once,a horrid place to be.
You are such a great writer Tinka.
Love from
kay.

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on July 7, 2006

Oh my! I agree with Ed, this too shall pass. In the meantime...have some cookies and milk!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 7, 2006

This, too, shall pass, Tinky - if one only has enough faith.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 7, 2006

We all have these days Tinks. But you're a winner..

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on July 7, 2006

Hi, Sweet Tinks. I can feel the emotion in this piece. Good to read you again despite the sadness of the poem. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on July 7, 2006

Dear friend...you work is indeed getting more and more vivid, better as time goes on. I hope this particular piece is not factual, for you do not need to be in such a place. Take care my friend and stay in touch.

Reviewed by William Haynes

Reviewed on July 7, 2006

Demons often lie, Hope you discover the light soon, it's out there.
Bill

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on July 7, 2006

troubling read,

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

look out of that bad place and and see the beauty surounding you ...

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Grace will find you Tinka, be strong, hold on.... you will survive even this. God is with you.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Tinka you don't belong in a bad place, get the hell out of there!
The poem is superb, but the idea that it conveys is not. Take care please!

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

The author is floundering in rings of madness, of every-dayness, of life. I would offer her a chocolate chip cookie, would I could...

With love,

Erin

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Very sad, Tinka.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

That's too bad 'cause the pic looks like a beautiful place. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

As we have all walked in the shadows of darkness in our lifes this too shall pass. soon you will walk again in the sun dear Tinka and know the walk was worth it.

Fee

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Tinka, I've been reading you for several years now...and you keep getting better and better. This is a gem.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

I agree with Richard...you're in the loop for better days and you are a strong woman. All your writings are strong...eveb at your lowest you float right up and make everything better. I support you and I believe in you Tinka.

Love and harmony,
Susan

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Tinka . . .
I am beginning to believe that you are in training for something much grander than you could ever imagine.

Suffering is a form of refining!

Feel what you are feeling but don't let it rot the roots of who you are.

STAND STRONG! And focus on the good at the end of the day, not what rankled you and what is unresolved!
Richard

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Tinka, lighten up.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

this is an incredible work...I can only hope that it's not personal for you.

Susan

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

I wish I could sing this for you! a take off where Peter and Rhonda left off.
ONLY YOU----- can, make YOUR deams, come true
ONnn LY YOU------ can be TRUE to YOU
ONLY YOU--- can fill your heart,
with His-- power and once aGAIN START,
ONLY YOU, ONLeeee YOUuuuhuuhuu!!
Take charge, sis!!! thru His mighty love and strength, HE'll GET YOU THRU----- BUT IT TAKES--YOU-- TOO!!

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Tinka-sweetie, Peter is exactly right! ONLY YOU...square your shoulders, and directly face whatever it is, and don't blink. Call on your Inner Reserve......through Him, you are MORE than a Conqueror - you are an OVERCOMER!................'Only...BELIEVE', whispers Jesus.

love & hugs & prayers, Rhonda

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Swim before you sink.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Tinka
You are caught between a rock and a hard place...
Only you can extricate yourself from it...
Peter

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Breath!!!!
feel love.
a gentle kiss.
breath.

quiet an extrodandary write, darlin'.
TX

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on July 6, 2006

Tinka! What is wrong? Please, do come out of there! You don't belong into any bad places, even though you write well about it,
Love , B&R