Troubled Soul (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 17, 2006

Another fine piece! I hope you are not living in these visions. I hope this is merely your brillance! \/vvv\/ <------ Rottie Smile

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on July 11, 2006

well done

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on July 11, 2006

smile--- it can always get worseter.
TX

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 11, 2006

Powerful write, Tinka; hope you are okay! You are in my prayers today!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :)

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Soul Repair Done Cheap...call 1-800-555-696...e

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Thought provoking write.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

yes, i find the pathos of this poem Tinka, incredibly strong ...

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Wow...Trask certainly gave us something to think about!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

No Soul Is Troubled Only By Human Outside Of It,i.e. Scientists Have Determined Weighing Dead Bodies Before & After Death That Something Leaves Body Weighs Approx 1/4 Ounce They Believe It Is The (Your) Soul...

TRASK

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

C'mon babe...Try less pot...

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Such ache and sadness as your mind allows fresh memories to sneak back in...I can feel your tears.
Love,
Taylor~

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Tinka-girl, you ARE strong...and getting stronger. I see something different here.......you are stepping back and seing it for what it is! That is why the write is so powerful - because YOU are surging with a new wave of His power!

Now don't look back! Love you, Rhonda

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

This beautiful poem, filled with such pathos, I can only pray for Creator's embrace to strengthen and sustain you as you go through this trial! As the saying goes "This too shall pass!"

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Advice is good, if it is good advice, and those willing to give advice are many.

I have found, in my own seasons of suffering, that nothing will lessen the amount of time ordained for the season. It will be what it is, and we will feel what we feel, and it will end when it ends, and there is nothing anyone can do to change that.

I have always reemerged a wiser man afterwards, and I have always been blessed when I was able to open up and share, along the way, as you are, those mountains of feelings that daily threatened to overwhelm me.

There is nothing anyone can do to lessen what you are learning and feeling, and can only hope that those who are trying won't be likened to so many meaningless platitudes.

I can assure you of one thing Tink . . . there is an end to this season!

Stand Strong!
Richard

Reviewed by Jennifer Croy (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

I think this is a delightful poem and the music is so uplifting Great job Tinka! Jennifer

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Heart wrenching write of pain that cannot be stilled or tears that cannot be stopped, you pour your soul into this one but know that all of this will pass someday and you will feel the urge to smile and run in the sun along a beach again, of this I am certain. My thoughts are with you Tink.

Fee

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Heartbreaking write Tinka. No situation is worthy of so much pain.
HUGS

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Tinka, if you are having a decline, you have a wonderful way of putting your feelings into words. They are sure to help many. I can't say it enough...you keep getting better and better.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

I agree with good old George, Tinky.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Ah Tinka, so very sad and troubling, my heart goes out to you, This touches my heart so deeply, Take care my friend,

Reindeer

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Your dark poetry is scary.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Tinks

You have to take your destiny into your own hands...that's the only way this " living nightmare " is ever going to pass...and don't look back, OK...

It's absolute agony just reading your grief and distress..

Love

Peter

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Take a deep breath........accept goodness.........reject the hurt.......and go on Tinka......and maybe.......avoid certain situations that might result in further hurts.......be good to yourself....you deserve much more...........
hugs........anita :)

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

That's why He came, sis for our troubled souls. Take heart sweet one, this TOO shall pass.