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Spider-Webs-Flashing
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"Spider-Webs-Flashing "


This is no fiction!!
Spider… flashing… jumping
Cobwebs dancing in circles
O’ Sh#t what’s wrong
Am I losing my mind?
Spiders… flashing… lightning
Cobwebs floating around
Could this be a migraine?
Spiders… flashing… jumping
Many days later and still dancing
Am I losing my mind?
Following spiders in my head
Am I crazy am I sad
No I am glad you around
Silvery lighting flashing
I am crazy I know it
Because there are cobwebs
Deep inside my head…
Trying to escape
Through the windows of my soul
The door is open
But they hesitate
They can’t escape
Will this be a big mistake?
If these spiders ever do escape
Will I lose my mind?

 

Copyright © 2006 Tinka Boukes
 


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 Reviews of "Spider-Webs-Flashing"
Reviewed on August 22, 2006
I like your play on spiders Tink.... and if not true! GOOD! Great Upty write! Love&Light and HuGs, *She*

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on August 21, 2006
reminded me of my daughter and her phobia of spiders!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 16, 2006
very creative and unique way of approaching the psyche as crawling about itself ...

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on August 16, 2006
Ooooh!! Spiders don't scare me. I consider them an omen much like the owl...it's a bit if mystery but I'd say they're your protectors. Eerie but beautifully penned.
Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 16, 2006
Intense and frightening Tink, I hope this is metaphorical and not reality. Stark images for sure.

Fee

Reviewed by Victor Dean (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2006
As long as we know they are there. It is the not knowing that is a problem.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 16, 2006
I don't think you'll lose your mind dear Tinks, but you may be trading one muse for another. You are growing!

Very original write for you ...

Richard Lloyd cederberg

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on August 16, 2006
well done

Reviewed by Gloria Buono
Reviewed on August 16, 2006
"Spider-Webs-Flashing" is a creative and symbolic poem filled with so much imagination. I've never thought of 8-legged crawlers in my head before. My best, Gloria

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2006
Well done Tinka..

Love & Light, Dove

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 16, 2006
Never heard of a mindless spider causing any distress except to give you a good scare now and then. You are of sound mind my dear never fear otherwise.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 16, 2006
Wow! this is very esoteric Tinka. Unusual for you, but really well done. Spiders and web a great metaphor!

Reviewed by m w
Reviewed on August 16, 2006
Stress can create migranes and those flashing lights before your eyes... wonderful capture of the confusion it causes.

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on August 16, 2006
Princess Tinka,
Sometimes, the webs are all that are holding us together...and the freedom, in shaking them free, is that we can see clearly now!

Excellently woven riddle, you amazing chick you! LOL

Love&Hugs, Sis

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 16, 2006
Tinks

You bring a smile to my face with this fun and light hearted write...
You can keep the spiders..lols

Peter

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on August 16, 2006
Arachne challenged the Goddess Athena to a weaving contest. Arachne filled her canvass with subjects that showed the failings of the gods. Athena tore the work to pieces and the terrified maiden hung herself. Athena then turned Arachne into a spider and the rope into a cobweb, condemning the maid to spin forever. The Great Weaver in Native American mythology is also the Creator who spins the thread of life from its own substance and attaches all people to it by the umbilical cord. The Mayan Goddess Ixchel took the form of a spider...Keep on spinning your silken tales, Tinka...we need trusted weavers of the web...

Sage

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2006
The best part about this is that it makes you feel frantic while reading it which matches the words, one of your best.


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