Sickened” (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 15, 2006

Hi Tinka, I'd say this person is begging for help, but doesn't exactly know quite how to express/get it, so he/she lashes out at everyone and everything. They crave happiness, but can seem to find it. Pity!

God Bless
Lena

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on September 11, 2006

Very 'in your face'. Well said.

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on September 9, 2006

Hi ya' TinK~
Be Careful- Misery loves Company! Great Thoughts Cast out to the Wind... Sorry - I haven't read too much of you lately, since heading back to work! I will try on Satur.s - and try and be fair to Everyone too! hmmm...Love and HuGs! BE SAFE and BE Happy! Love, Sheee

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon

Reviewed on September 8, 2006

You tell 'em, Tinka! :o) Well done.

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on September 8, 2006

Nail 'em good, Tinks.......might be the cure for the sickened mind!

Great rant!

Love you, Sis
Rhonda

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on September 8, 2006

tinks, something/one has got yu goin what better place to let all hang out then poetry?

god rat

l& h
john+

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on September 8, 2006

Rant away.. And feel mish accompo'

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on September 8, 2006

powerful Tinka.....

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)

Reviewed on September 8, 2006

Get it out...and get him gone. Great vent! Panda :)

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on September 8, 2006

Sick minds and sick people are far too plentiful... thank goodness there are people like you to add to the counterbalance of it all.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on September 8, 2006

(((HUGS))), love and prayer, Tinka, a reality for far too many. Get out while you can!

Karla.

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on September 8, 2006

That Tinka was a stab into someone who deserves it. Glad you're ok though. Victor

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on September 8, 2006

I hear ya Tinka.
Fee

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on September 7, 2006

Venting a la Tinka is well put...right there...dammit!

You go girl!
Susan

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on September 7, 2006

Poetry with a serious pissed off bite to it--nice:-)
Aberjhani

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 7, 2006

good poem, Tinka ... keep your healthy mind above it all ...

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on September 7, 2006

heck, Tinka, this is more poetic than some of the stuff I come up with when I'm feelin' fine and literary! you are more than okay. your life is beautiful. thanks for sharing its many colors here. Dawn

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on September 7, 2006

Tinks

You have so much going on in your life..
You don't deserve this..

Love

Peter

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on September 7, 2006

Jus Keep On Writing It All...Stop Apoligizing!

TRASK

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on September 7, 2006

Sounds like a right poem to me chuckie, good stuff gal.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on September 7, 2006

I know this person...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on September 7, 2006

I'd say this is a darn good poem!

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on September 7, 2006

i'm going to have to read a bit more to understand from where you are coming but i like how you say it.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on September 7, 2006

Tellin it like it is ofttimes a cathartic to release ones self from the antipathy for the indiscriminate.

You and I are on the same page today Tinks ...

Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 7, 2006

I'm glad you can write it out Tinks! I hope it has helped! You are poetic even when you don't try to be;-)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on September 7, 2006

A sad way to be when, at the end of the day, you drive yourself into an isolation that runs the risk of even sickening yourself. Perhaps even a sick masochistic mind might even try that!!?? There must be desperate roots here and cause of deep pain. Be well, Tinka. Glad you're OK and this is just musin... LOL K xx

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on September 7, 2006

I certainly hope this is not how you feel, lol..Sending lots of hugs!!!

Xxx dove

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on September 7, 2006

so sadly true.....good rant tinka
pax Anita

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on September 7, 2006

For it not being poetry it reads pretty poetic to me...If you say you are okay I'll believe you, but if you need a shoulder..i'm here!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on September 7, 2006

Get it off your chest Tinky-Doll