Grip
Grip with a dimmer vision
As-it watches me faint upon the scorn
With its icy hands - a taut grip
Brushes over me, freezes me to the bone;
Suddenly, I begin to slither down,
I am immersed in delirium – clutching,
Clutching for salvation, the grip glides up,
Abruptly, it refreezes my soul;
The writhing struggle to set my mind at ease
To somehow summon up the words
To tell you that the love and trust are gone;
The first moments are like the last moments
Held grip tight in time by second opinions
Now tossed into a cold, dark place that pains
Well-defined, immense – a compulsive course
Looking, searching for a glimmer of hope -
And then comes another icy blow . . .
Copyright ã 2006 Tinka Boukes & Dennis O’Bell
This is your Niche, Dynamic Duo!!!
Rock on, Tinka & Dennis
Love, Rhonda
yours, simonb
Paul;-)
And then comes another icy blow . . .
Sad, but true, far too often, for many of us, Tinks.
love & peace
William
Nice work, Tinka & Dennis!
Thank you,
Sheila
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
fee
Love,
Susan
Love, Dove
Rusty
Love,
CJ
You paint these thoughts with the mysterious strokes of the surreal. You have attained a depth in this one that I have not read before. Wowzers Sissy!
Yur Bro ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
I think Aleja's comments are bang on !
C'est magnifique
God Bless
Peter
Fine collab!
ET