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Grip
by Tinka Boukes → (All Poetry by Tinka Boukes)
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Grip

 

Grip with a dimmer vision

As-it watches me faint upon the scorn

With its icy hands - a taut grip

Brushes over me, freezes me to the bone;

Suddenly, I begin to slither down,

I am immersed in delirium – clutching,

Clutching for salvation, the grip glides up,

Abruptly, it refreezes my soul;

The writhing struggle to set my mind at ease

To somehow summon up the words

To tell you that the love and trust are gone;

The first moments are like the last moments

Held grip tight in time by second opinions

Now tossed into a cold, dark place that pains

Well-defined, immense – a compulsive course

Looking, searching for a glimmer of hope -

And then comes another icy blow  . . .

 

Copyright ã 2006 Tinka Boukes & Dennis O’Bell
 
 


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 Reviews of "Grip"
Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on October 28, 2006
Indubitably, this power-constructure separates fact - from myth!

This is your Niche, Dynamic Duo!!!

Rock on, Tinka & Dennis

Love, Rhonda

Reviewed by Simon Barreiros (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2006
Wonderfully taut, i can really feel this write. When a love is not love this icy pall is quite well known by all yet rarely expressed so well. The two of you have given the sad lovers silent, strangled scream a voice. Really nice work.
yours, simonb

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 25, 2006
Brilliant and the music works well..

Reviewed by m w
Reviewed on October 25, 2006
Powerful write

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on October 25, 2006
Intense and icy, really cool collab Tinks.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 25, 2006
Looking, searching for a glimmer of hope -
And then comes another icy blow . . .

Sad, but true, far too often, for many of us, Tinks.




Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 24, 2006
An excellent write ...Tinka

love & peace
William

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 24, 2006
dynamic collab ...

Reviewed by S J (Reader)
Reviewed on October 24, 2006
Most powerful and beautiful collaboration!
Nice work, Tinka & Dennis!

Thank you,
Sheila

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 24, 2006
Very creative..................

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on October 24, 2006
Wow! This is a very powerful write, you guys are awesome together. The music just set the stage to perfection. Great job...great team.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 24, 2006
Strong images and feelings pervade this one Tinka as you struggle with the pain and the unknown, great collaboration.

fee

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on October 24, 2006
You bards are two peas in a pod with this pen. I really like the painting y'all created.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on October 24, 2006
Powerful and beautiful..

Love, Dove

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 24, 2006
Liked this one, Tinka.

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell
Reviewed on October 24, 2006
Nice job of blending words and music.

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on October 24, 2006
Really nice writing lady and gentleman. Waiting for another
Rusty

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 24, 2006
Quite a good collaboration Tinka. Congratulate Dennis too. This is a lovely dark poem, a genre I like very much. Victor

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on October 24, 2006
This is haunting stuff, Tinks -- You and Dennis did a great job writing it.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 24, 2006
Tinks ...

You paint these thoughts with the mysterious strokes of the surreal. You have attained a depth in this one that I have not read before. Wowzers Sissy!

Yur Bro ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 24, 2006
Dam those winters of the mind.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on October 24, 2006
Tinks

I think Aleja's comments are bang on !
C'est magnifique

God Bless

Peter

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 24, 2006
Very intense poem with dynamic flow and thoughtful concepts.
Fine collab!

ET

Reviewed on October 24, 2006
I am so glad to be the first to look at your newest work my friend. I will be back on a little later. This is very deep and i get the feeling that this took some thought for a minute. It happens to all of us and then we can just come up with something at times so quickly right? I love this poem and never settle for the icy blows but the good ones.


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