Final Call (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Michael Gibbs

Reviewed on March 17, 2008

Violence and sadness together, I hear in this piece. Lovely.

Reviewed by Daring Sunshine

Reviewed on March 27, 2007

Oncor, Oncor...keep it up Tinka, you are a fabulous writer at what wheatever you write!
Peace&Grace,
Sharon

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on March 26, 2007

As long as the heart can embrace life there is hope and love has a chance

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on March 25, 2007

Well done, Tinka. Always embrace life, in whatever form
we're offered, especially when being launched into the great
beyond.
Much enjoyed this write, Poetess.
Peace,
Carolyn

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on March 25, 2007

(clapping) and a standing ovation here Tinka, well done! love holly

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on March 25, 2007

long as you keep that embrace Tink, you'll be ok, great expressive poetry, know the feeling you put in this

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 24, 2007

A beautiful emotional write Tinka
Peace be with you

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on March 24, 2007

Only one word will do, Tinka - MAGNIFIQUE!!!!!

Love&Hugs, Rhonda

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on March 24, 2007

I FEEL the HOPE strongly!
What a gem you have here Tink!
I plan to treasure and savor!
The music blending sweetly!
Keep your chin up as you meet!

Warmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox

Reviewed by Michael Charles Messineo

Reviewed on March 24, 2007

Tinka,
You have captured the emotions perfectly. Excellent write!!!

...Michael

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on March 23, 2007

my friend...you just keep writing with this kind of excellence and there will always be a place in the heart for you...both within yourself and within the hearts of those you grace with your words....
Excellent write!

Reviewed by Debra Harmes-Kurth (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2007

Tinka,
I started reading this and was filled with pain for "her". But the ending is so uplifting......thanks for sharing this~!
debra

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 23, 2007

Knowing there is still a place
Deep within her heart
Embracing
Life

That says a great deal, TinkaSweets. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on March 23, 2007

A final curtain should be faced with grace.
Sadness or regret just will fog the tunnel distorting the light at its end.
He doesn't want to meet with tears.
Georg

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

nicely done

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

Amen! Just a breath of hope to inspire that burning ember that stays lit, even in it's darkest moments, when it shines the brightest!
Awesome!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

Encore, encore..

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

It is hopeful and through the sadness the light shines.
Keep the faith Tinky! :) You are strong as Susan says.

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

Very deep feelings of sadness and I feel
A touch of depression that brings
Sad emotions to your reader
Very touching and powerful write!!
Much Much Love And Peace to You Always..Morning Star

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

She's a strong woman. You are a strong woman.

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

very sad but hopeful i think. love to you tinks

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

Deep sadness here, with a resiliancy to face them head on: like you said in Karen's story review, only a very strong person can face the challenges head on. You've done it so far. Don't you dare give up!!!!!! I believe in you. You're in my prayers--thanks for yours--a very powerful, emotive write.

((((((HUGS)))))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

There's a melancholy feel here, and it makes me sad. A very touching poem, Tinka, yet I can feel the hope that's still there.
Well expressed, my friend.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

Sad and very touching. Don't ever stop writing... it helps. -- Jeff

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

Wonderful write Tinky-Doll

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

Tinka,

You have a great big heart and many people love you; you have to believe that! You are in my prayers today! Very sad, melancholy write!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :(

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

Ah DEar Tinks your heart is so big there will always be a place to find hope.

great write with hope refreshed at the end.
Fee

Reviewed by Approximately Naive

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

Knowing there is still a place
Deep within her heart
Embracing
Life

And continuing standing ovation from each day, each month, each year, each season, all calling upon your esteem for an encore!

Regards
Dai

Consumed by a burning flame

Melancholy started to show

Melted away her heart

Nothing could fill the void

Within the silence of her dark