In-Security” (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 2, 2007

Read aloud, the scenery built within metaphor rolls off the tongue with the smoothness of the tide gliding away from shore. -HB

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on April 4, 2007

Wonderful images in this poem.. I can see it !...M

Reviewed by Daring Sunshine

Reviewed on April 3, 2007

Christ said come into the waters, and there's a place that is over your head when you feel "this is it..." - Jesus will be there!
I'll be praying for you, Tinka!
Prayer with tears my friend.
Sharon

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 1, 2007

a provoking metaphorical poem, Tinka ... being in-secure will hopefully provide the answers ...

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on April 1, 2007

Absolutely stunning words
Wishing it could take away
All the hurt of yesterday
I could feel your sadness and emotions
Through this delicate words
And the sound of the ocean waves
Your poetry is always touching and beautiful!!
Love and Peace To You Always
Your friend...Morning star

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on April 1, 2007

While reading IN-SECURITY I kept seeing a poetess swimming powerfully against the tide, sometimes swallowing bitter then spitting out healing empowering metaphors. Thank you for the powerful read. Hope you have a great National Poetry Month.

Aberjhani

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on April 1, 2007

Nice reflective write Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 1, 2007

Wishing it could take away
All the hurt of yesterday

May all your wishes come true, Tinky.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 1, 2007

Sea waves are letters send to us a long long time ago by a primal thinker that could write on water.
Very well done.
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

Tinka, this is an absolute gem! The answers are there, in your soul, one needs only to search and ask. Enjoyed.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

your poetry is always touching Tinks, everything you want is in your brain, tap in

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

The waters of insecurity do run deep. Well done, Tinky sis!

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

wHAT a great curl on that wave, I wish I had my surfboard on that one...ed

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

Tinka,

Excellent display of emotions here; you are in my prayers! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :(

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

Tinka,

Most excellent portrayal of in-security and sadness: you are emotion. :) One just doesn't read it, they feel your words.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

Wonderful!

Chrissy

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

Stunning write my friend, beautiful imagery...enjoyed this very much!
Always a pleasure to stop by and read your wonderful poetry!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

Beautiful composition on soul's emotions and observation of the ocean of life's flux and doubts... A profound colorful rainbow of feelings.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

Beautiful Tinka capturing insecurity with nature flowing through your verses.

Peace,
josie

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2007

They just might, in a bottle with a note.... saying something great.. like

Englandwontheworldcups/aneverstoodachance...

In melancholy’s depth of in-security

Brushing shoulder with the land