As Time Goes By (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Michael LaSalle (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2007

looking for a lovers arms in the horizon, tinka, this is outstandingly breathtaking in vision and concept. fully poetic magnificence, keep that pen flowing, mike

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on May 11, 2007

Tinka,

Suffering and glory...you can't have one, without the other...and you wrap them both up beautifully in your verse today. Love your pic!

Love&Hugs&Blessings to you always, Rhonda
PS>A kiss for "TooT" & the Happiest Mother's Day to you, too, SIS!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 11, 2007

Another soul-stirring, emotive write, TinkaSweets. It easily moves the reader to tears of empathy. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on May 10, 2007

A melancholy beauty, Dear Tinka.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on May 10, 2007

Truly a beautiful poem, Tinky! Loved it!

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on May 9, 2007

Beautiful poetic thoughts
This is beautifully written and it brings many
images to mind and very tender especially May you find peace at your nest and you captured beautiful yearnings of a heart
Love it!!
Love and Peace to you always
Your friend...Morning Star

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on May 9, 2007

A lonely heart finds little comfort until love is found. Touching write Tinka

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on May 9, 2007

Beautiful write, very tender and romantic! Well written my friend! Enjoyed this much!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on May 8, 2007

Wonderfully touching and sadly felt Tink!
Great write!
Thank you for offering your heart!
WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 8, 2007

great love poem Tink, love that music. Love G

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 8, 2007

Yep, it's them puppies and blades of grass that do it... along with the wild geese flying away and each setting of the sun... Wonderful capture of a heart that longs for the freedom to fly from here to... there... Be well, Babes. LOL K xx

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 8, 2007

Excellent poetry, Tinka; very well penned! BRAVA, my friend, BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 8, 2007

Little puppies at her feet, and chewing grass, does sound peaceful, Tinky, and it does make the time go faster.

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on May 8, 2007

A simple yet elegant sampling of your poetic mind! wonderful piece.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 8, 2007

The poem got me until she yearned for her lovers arms, that's when jealousy grabbed my heart.
Excellent.
Georg

Reviewed by Cynthia Borris

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

Tinka,

You always deliver the complete package: photo, music and words that blend into one. Great job.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

So very warm and tender a write this is. So passionately gazing out into the nothingness abyss searching for answers. Enjoyed.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

Very touching, Tinka. You made me feel as though I knew her.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by H Cruz

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

Sweet as mountain dew! Hey you. :)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

beautifully moving poem, Tinka ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

Your poems resonate with such yearning for love,
the page seems to quiver. Haunting write Tinka!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

Tinka, truly beautiful.

Thanks,
Dan

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

This is so beautiful Tinka, the images are so vivid.

Reviewed by HB Clayton

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

She is probably torn between well wishing and the internal dark longing for puppies to grace the feet of her lover. I may be off but I see a poem about the sadness of unfinished business and the eternal longing for love's reunion. - HB

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

This breeches the miles with the longing and yearning to be with the one the heart cries out should be yours to share time and space with. Lovely write with just a touch of soft sadness....

Fee

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

Tinks the music with your poems distracts me from the cepth of your words, as having to use two senses is more the an english bloke can handle as we only have one...sensethatitnottheboysthingyale...

She puts it in her mouth
And with a blank stare
Just gazed upon horizon far <---- so it's not just me...

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

When the tears flow Tinky is right there with her hearfelt poems.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

Tinka,

Many thoughts have been pondered with a free moment and a blade of grass.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

Thank you Tinka
for this beautifull love longing poetry
only you can create, with such feelings
Peace be with

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Approximately Naive

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

She sat down and touched the ground
And pulled out a blade of grass
She puts it in her mouth
And with a blank stare
Just gazed upon horizon far

Hmm, in silence she places a blade of life between her lips to chew over, then slowly she turns each page of the distant horizon only to discover each chapter written in the freeflowing ink of lovelorn tears.

Touching

Regards
Dai

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

Great story poem Tinka..
Poor girl, I can't seem to find her silent path
as hard as I try and look, and look..
Love the write and Tinka...
Nice music..
Now that I have the new computer I can hear the music..

As Time Goes By

Towards a place to find peace