Abyss” (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 28, 2008

Tinka,

Your writing takes me to a whole new dimension . . . absolutely brilliant!!

Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed on June 15, 2007

May the sunshine soon come back to warm you....and dry your floor

Walt

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on May 29, 2007

YOu touch a soul deeply with this one Sweet Tinks!
FEEL BEtter!
Stay Happy!
STay Positive!
BE SAFE!
WArmly, WArrior Spirit Lady Sheeeoox
Warmest HuGs!

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on May 23, 2007

oh, Tinks...

Reviewed by M Flack

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

Very bittersweet poem. Such love is beauitful and rare. The pain of seperation can be blessed and healed with the return of the one loved. I pray this will come soon for you...

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

A Masterful write My Friend Tinka
I can almost feel all the emotions
within a dark damp setting.

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

I can relate, TinkaSweets... ...sad and soul-reaching. Take care. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

Excellent write, Tinky; very well done! BRAVA, my dear friend, BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

Sissy ...
Beautiful sentiment and simile in this one. Your heart is a wonder dear friend.
Love from big bro ...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

What a treasure, Tinka this is exquisite!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

Very touching sweet lady,stay safe and well...Hugsss
Love,
Chanti Lace

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on May 21, 2007

Don't you just hate moments like this, Tinka...and they are inevitable. Cheer up sweet one!
Love,
Taylor

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on May 21, 2007

lovely work here my friend...clear, vivid imagery and bittersweet longing...bitter for the absence, sweet for the eventual reunion...

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 21, 2007

be gone abyss, i send Tinka this kiss, so the deep hole she'll miss

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on May 21, 2007

What an outstanding write dear friend, very powerful and has a sense of longing about it! Exceptional write!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on May 21, 2007

Very, very effective ! Tone stays true throughout. Blue and dark and cold, but with an undercurrent of warmth. Brava!! 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 21, 2007

Every abyss have a bottom, we need to find the right thing to fill it with.
Georg

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 21, 2007

Tinka,

Warm up those hands and let your heart do the talking my friend.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on May 20, 2007

Oooooo, in such a deep, dark place......If only wishes really could come true.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 20, 2007

powerful longing and passion ... the abyss is awful deep ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 20, 2007

Oh so sad but oh o good! Love that song. I too could use some help making it through tonight;-)Let's go shopping in studsville;-)hahaha

Cheers!

Eileen

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on May 20, 2007

A very powerful and Intense feelings of
Desire and longing and yearning
All this to me is true love,But also
There's some sadness and loneliness
Wow you write some great poems
My friend!!
Love and Peace to you always
Your friend....Morning Star

Reviewed by Michael LaSalle (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2007

tink, this is a Bravo piece! your metaphorical rendering swept me away,
taking the reader to the depth, a true expression of the soul, loved this, mike

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 20, 2007

Sad but still not giving up...this poem offers hope because of that and the colours and images are perfect for sure.

Fee

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on May 20, 2007

Beautiful done!
Love, R&B

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on May 20, 2007

Lovely.

Chrissy

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 20, 2007

This is so real it makes me sag, Tinka. My bubble's burst and I'm leaking... The abyss is flooding here... Waterworks may ensue... You're so good at moody blue, but you look good in parrot colours, too! Have a cockatiel-cocktail to cheer you up... Sex On The Beach, for example... No idea what's in it, but sure sounds lively! :)) Love, Kate... ey-up... look who's back...

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 20, 2007

You just gotta have your man.

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on May 20, 2007

Most beautiful pen, the music adds so much to your work,

Thanks,
Dan

Reviewed by Brett Moore

Reviewed on May 20, 2007

dark write, Tinka, and nice imagery to convey this.

Brett

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on May 20, 2007

Sounds like a little warm weather is needed,

Nice work

Best wishes for lots of sunshine "Tink Tinka"