Wicker rocker Cooling breeze Perched between home and the world In a place all my own Time slows down Little pleasures begged to be savored Stay as long as you like Simple enough ritual Loose ends all wrapped up Nothing fretted over Breathtaking views offer inspiration Behold nature’s wonders Fog lifts, gives way to sparkling water Escape to my favorite place, not far away Traditional memories now being played Listened contentedly, redolent of days gone by Must have been invented for vacationing in the past Screened in to shelter us from soaking up the present Low clouds slowly race across the sky As the wind ripples through them erratic Steal a quiet moment as the sun veils the porch A cool breeze holds me as I drift off to sleep The sound of the ocean waves invigorates the senses Takes charge of empty feelings, forbids them to move in Summer’s pleasures have taken up residence Reveal their glory as they reach into my soul Day turns into night where black silhouettes appear Casts their shadows against the dreaming lambency of the moonlight As they survey the windless and tide-less sea It drifts along past the quiet solitude of the dunes Pausing now and then to peer up at the star-filled sky A new dawn brushes away the darkness with new promises Flicked here and there – welcomes all visitors.
I love this poem, music and the view, I have seen and been here a few times!
I need to go back!
WArmly, Warrior Sheeeoox
A Gem I will savor and treasure!
oh bless you, bless you...i so needed this at this very moment...i'm gazing into that picture and feeling that breeze...i shall add this to my library for the next time I'm feeling closed in...
Gimme, gimme, gimme... I have been away from my very own beach scenario for 24 hours already and can't wait to get back tomorrow... You took me there today, at least, Tinks, for which I can't be grateful enough! Even if this were just an inkblot it would STILL be a great poem to me... which it isn't and which it is, if you get my drift......... ARRRRRRRRRRGH it's the lack of sea air.... LOL K :))
Beautiful poetic thoughts
They reminds me of a lazy and relaxing Sunday afternoon
Enjoying the view o the ocean the sitting in your porch
Deep in thought!
Outstanding collaboration Lance and Tinka
Hugssss Love Peace and Joy to both of you...Yolie
Hyannis on Cape Cod, the beach house had that porch with the sea view where one of my grandfather sat, rocking back and forward his rocking chair as he smoke a pipe of sweet tobacco with his eyes way out, beyond horizon and time, lost himself in inner toughts.
It was a white porch too.
Georg
This is one of your best pieces, Tinka.
Without hesitation my thoughts hooked a line from a Small Faces song, Lazy Sunday Afternoon. The line was, 'Close my eyes and drift away.' This was triggered by your line:
'A cool breeze holds me as I drift off to sleep'
Ah, the thought of it
Regards
Dai
Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)
Reviewed on July 26, 2007
Lance and Tinka...very relaxing write...Beautiful collab. Hugs, Peggy
That porch needs a hammock & ME! Damn, I would never leave that porch, eating all my meals outside, pausing inside only once a awhile to shower...don't want to be "STINKY"...peace and love, Ed & Rufuz
This is a portrait of words, Tinka, so beautiful and soothing to the senses. Rich hues color your thoughts and the soft breeze, like a paintbrush, whispers upon the soul. Excellent offering, Tinks!
Take care,
Sherry
A view I had for many years, brings back many wonderful memories! You are making me soooooooooooooooo homesick! Fantastic write and the air smells good too.....
Outstanding write Tinka
supurb imagery, I felt as if I were there
sitting at that cozy looking porch
taking in deep breaths of the salty breeze
Listening to the sound of the surf
Thank you, for taking me there.
William
Love & Peace
Reviewed by Tiana Jett (Reader)
Reviewed on July 25, 2007
I love the serene feel of this beautiful collaboration, Tinka ... I loved to hang out on my porch and just chill ... hugs
"The Great Teen Fruit War, A 1960 Novel" involves conflict between the Blues (sons of blueberry farmers) and the Reds (sons of peach growers) in a southern New Jersey agricultural community.
"The Great Teen Fruit War, A 1960 Novel" involves conflict between the Blues (sons of blueberry farmers) and the Reds (sons of peach growers) in a southern New Jersey agricultural community.
Let your children enjoy the wonders and adventures of pets that join a family, bringing joy and heartwarming moments to their everyday lives. This story is about Tubby and Riley, two dogs who needed a good, loving home.
I need to go back!
WArmly, Warrior Sheeeoox
A Gem I will savor and treasure!
cynth'ya
peace and blessings,
carolyn
Gina
They reminds me of a lazy and relaxing Sunday afternoon
Enjoying the view o the ocean the sitting in your porch
Deep in thought!
Outstanding collaboration Lance and Tinka
Hugssss Love Peace and Joy to both of you...Yolie
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Lovely view, lovely picture, and a lovely poem, Tinky.
It was a white porch too.
Georg
Without hesitation my thoughts hooked a line from a Small Faces song, Lazy Sunday Afternoon. The line was, 'Close my eyes and drift away.' This was triggered by your line:
'A cool breeze holds me as I drift off to sleep'
Ah, the thought of it
Regards
Dai
Eileen
hugs
Fee
Take care,
Sherry
Be safe,
Karen
Thanks,
Dan
well done
Walt
Lovely write and pic...
Hugs
your island friend, Jenni
supurb imagery, I felt as if I were there
sitting at that cozy looking porch
taking in deep breaths of the salty breeze
Listening to the sound of the surf
Thank you, for taking me there.
William
Love & Peace