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The Incredible Mr. Ziing
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The Incredible Mr. Ziing

 

White habits, Red Cross

Four ranks of brethren


Nine Templar Knights

Impoverished status didn’t last long

Proved their worth –

Extraordinary fervor &growth.

 

Lay authorities

Heaped on them favors

Both spiritual & temporal

Moved swiftly – sharp singing

Exempted from all jurisprudence –

Okayed by the Pope.

 

Property assimilated

Exempted from taxation

(Without representation)

Not even ecclesiastical tithes

Soon gave way to speculation –

Conflict proceeded in the Holy Land.

 

Landed property of the Order Led

Revenue due the churches quite certain

Castles turned quickly into remarkable ruins

By first to attack, last to retreat

New factions, blind obedience –

Also, docile to the voice of the ‘leader’.

 

Now, 400 Templar Knights strong in Jerusalem

As an army they were never very numerous

But were inspirited by a force quite Christian

The terror of the Mohammedans

90 met death & 80 were taken prisoner –

To the spoils belong the victors.

 

Hecatombs compelled the use of recruits

Excommunicated men now admitted

Jerusalem governmental orders brought

Intestine dissentions & fear

Papal (“by & for the”) inquiry –

Templar Knights found innocent?/quickly absorbed.

 

 

Copyright © 2007 Tinka Boukes & R. Lance Sheridan
 


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Reviewed by m w
Reviewed on September 22, 2007
We need more knights in today's world

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2007
Very beautiful pen...HUgsssss

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
Wow a beautiful tale of intrigue and history, beautifully done...

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
You two are branching out into ever more interesting topics. The den is lucky to have you paired together for this. Thanks for sharing.

Love,]
Eileen

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
Tis a cruel we we live in and is not
getting any better
Peace to all

William

Reviewed on September 20, 2007
It's been awhile Tink, and I felt this strongly!
Great write you two, and very important to recall!
Very compelling to say the least~!Intense!
Warmly, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox

STay Positive, Healthy and STrong! My friends

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
Sadly, the human race seems to learn very slowl if at all. Thank you, TinkaSweets. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
And one day, we all will be in front of the God that we have killed in His name...wonder what we will say to Him then.
Georg

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
I truly adore YA'LL's history classes, I jest feel smarter readin yore writes! Sendin love, hugs and apples to my teachers! LOVE YA'LL SC

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
i can only say that i must agree with mr. Ed-we just continue to find better ways to commit such horrors on each other

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
Your write speaks of a time long passed, but in reality it is a commentary about today. Sadly, he who wields the greatest weapon will be the winner, but of what?

So much to think about
Kathy

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
Sorry, but who is Mr. Ziing? People have been fighting since there were people. Unfortunately, war leads to innovation.

I notice that Mr. Sheridan though is a real tax hater. Has he read on the Fair Tax initiative? http://www.fairtax.org/site/PageServer

Hope you are well. ~ Sara

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
The Incredible Tinka...

TRASK

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
Very different for you, dear Tinks, and very nicely done!
love,
Susan

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
Man often don't do wot god wants and weareoutoftheblooycricketandruggeronlythesoccerleftnextyearitstheafricannationsithinknigeriamaywinthat.....

Reviewed on September 19, 2007

Interesting write Tinka

Blessings,
~Gwendolyn


Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
The atrocities commited in the name of religious belief and "Manifest Destiny" continue today. Even though the Templar Knights were brave and fought for what they believed to be right, they were still being controlled by "The Church." In those days there was no separation of church and state. As if there is today. We still hear preachers telling their congregations how to vote.
I say....If they are going to do that then let them pay taxes, because they are trying to influence government by trying to sway votes.

Walt

Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
Incredible write Tinka.
The courageous Templar Knights, a tale of life and death but only physically not spiritually. Thier place in history defined.
Thanks and best regards,
Chris

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
No victor <>

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
WELL DONE! BRAVO ROCK

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
Wow I am speechless such beautiful piece
Very deep and powerful
Thoughts of the history of mankind
Beautifully written and expressed!!
Love Peace and hugssss...Morning Star

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
I'm impressed; very well written, love holly

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
A very deep write you share with us today. Thank you Tinka.
Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed on September 19, 2007
A deep and compelling write.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
... Can I cut and paste Ed?? This crowd are as scary to me as the Klu Klux Klan. Unique and well-researched. A welcome unusual addition to the Board, you two.... the write... not... you two... you're quite normal... at least as much as me... ! :)) xx

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
Too deep for this old country boy . . .

Reviewed on September 19, 2007
All in the name of God. Sad. Well done, Tinka and Lance!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on September 19, 2007
Excellent write, Lance and Tinka; bravo! brava! Very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
The Templar Knights, The Crusades, The Spanish Inquisition, Hitler, the annihilation of Native Americans, Modern Day Terrorism, etc, and the entire history of mankind's extremely bloody wars with each other, so very often fueled by organized religious hatred and bigotry is very eye-opening reading. And I've always wondered what God must think of all of this, and of His earthly 'children.'

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
Good protestations. Well written.

George


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