Torture By Fate (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on December 31, 2007

well done

Reviewed by David Young

Reviewed on December 17, 2007

What a bite this has, very good.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on December 17, 2007

Powerful write dear Tinka, be well, love Holly

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 17, 2007

Heart rending lines that we all know can be all too real and all too painful. Good job here tinka.

Fee

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on December 17, 2007

The Cards Will Always Fall Where They Will Fall,i.e. Fate!

This Is Really Good Tinka...

TRASK

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on December 17, 2007

Yet it is only our inner programming that holds us back, of how we perceive life.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on December 17, 2007

There is a place, maybe a dream, where safety and love can be found.
Hopefully fate will intervene for you in a positive way Tinka dear.
Love,

Walt

Reviewed by Sheri Uy

Reviewed on December 17, 2007

Tinka, you've written this piece in a way that made me want to wrap my arms around you. Clear and concise, I can feel the resignation and acceptance to the hard hand of Fate. Splendid! Thank you for sharing.

Be well,
Sheri

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on December 17, 2007

Emotional and sad...

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on December 17, 2007

Tinka a very sad write that sits in the pit of my stomach but well written.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 17, 2007

So powerfully penned, Tinky.

Reviewed by Edward Lupinacci

Reviewed on December 17, 2007

Strong emotional write you have scribed here
always remember though that Fate is determined by choice

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on December 17, 2007

Tinka,

A very emotional ride. Love, Peace and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 16, 2007

through the power of words moving the course of fate, heal ...

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on December 16, 2007

Well done. Very expressive!
R~

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on December 16, 2007

Very powerful write indeed, so full of mixed emotions.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on December 16, 2007

She squeezes her eyes shut and prays a powerful prayer to the maker of all-- the maker of words awakens. From a hidden dimension, he reaches through the page and puts an "i" between the "fa" and the "te". Then he blows on the "e" and it changes, rounding down, the bottom opening up, and the line in the middle rising from the back to make a perfect "h". One "r" and one "t" dissapear, and the previous word rearranges into "routed". There you have it. She breathes in deeply the fresh hope as the door swings open: "Routed by faith," she departs...

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on December 16, 2007

Tinka, Prayer is powerful,, God is with you always,,, be strong !
This is a painful poem for me to read,,
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on December 16, 2007

Keep writing, Tinka; it will help you in the long run! God bless you, know you are always in my prayers!

Love you, girl!

(((HUGS))) As always, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on December 16, 2007

Keep writing about it..
I bet Ed M. would cry like a baby..
Happy days ahead Tinka
With love
Ron

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on December 16, 2007

Sometimes it is time to drop our drawers and give fate a good moonin, sayin," THIS ONE IS FOR YOU!" You always kick my ass, but to spite you I always survive! LOVE YA! SC

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on December 16, 2007

I do love torture, oh yes, leather chaps and leather whips and chains, oooh baby...;) e

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 16, 2007

This hurts and I pray it soon changes! Excellent poem, and listen to Jerry!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on December 16, 2007

Let it all out through your pen . . . Save yourself for the good time to come, my friend . . .

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on December 16, 2007

Fate can be a cruel lover... overcome and take control... its the only way Tinka

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on December 16, 2007

As Karen Vanerlaan (below) said, alarmingly sad--please take care. We can pray, but until you change your mind and decide your life--your sanity--is worth something, we can't do much!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *tears*

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on December 16, 2007

sad and alarming-sadly, i think that life can sure feel like this-be well, Tinka

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on December 16, 2007

Sad but well done.