Silence (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 26, 2008

love this one Tinka
I hate spiders
In my garden I don't mind them
Within the intrusion of my home
they become history
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Sandra Corona

Reviewed on January 11, 2008

Spider webs intrigue me; falling endlessly is my nightmare. Enjoyed, Tinka.

Yep, I'm back.

Sandy

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 6, 2008

It wasn't about the spiders, that nightmarish dream...from the deepest of the deepest surfaced for a moment that atavistic fear that pulls you back anytime you feel opening to someone, jumping over rejection's stones but colliding with the wall of that well known fear of deceitful love, an entrapment that the spider's web represent.
Somebody should put a tender reassuring kiss on your cheek.
Shatter that silence with a laugh!!!
Georg

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

GOOD! YOU woke up!
I love this poem Sweet Tink!
Better dreams ahead! :)
I love spiders, it wouldn't bother me none! I'm the Black Widow in spirit!
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

ARACHNOPHOBIA!!!! I might have misspelled it, but I'm a sufferer!
I'm with you and this one. Havin to pee, or not, LOL
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

Been right here in this same spot. I thought it was somwthing I ate. I woke up in a cold sweat. Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

Honey, This is so very Tinka, I love it.
But in reality you probably just had to pee.
Love,

Walt

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

Suger! You is so Dad Burn Adorable! Baby Girl, Ya needs to be like a Black Widow Spider, get a good hump and then eat the Dad Burn humpee! LOVE YA! SC

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

I have a fear of spiders too so I don't want them in my dreams but there seems to be more than we are reading in your lines Tinka. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

...good to disturb the silence...especially something woven in the past...awakening to where one began...the peacefulness of the heavens.
interesting Tinka...
John

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

I fear and dislike spiders
I'm Phobias of spiders and have been once!
Be very careful!
Excellent write!!
Peace Love and hugsss...Morning Star

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

It seems like there's a lot more to this poem than silence and spiders...could be just my thoughts...anyway great poem, love holly

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

I just love em, but don't let one bite me.
Love ya Tinka...
Always enjoy yous..
Ron

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

Scary...I hate spidies.

fee

Reviewed by Ted Bossis

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

imaginable indeed... & what if you finally get back to sleep only to dream that you've been awake all night_evol*Ted

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

Spell binding

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

Nothing like a good spider dream to get your juices flowing... wake up! wake up! LOL

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

The dreams . . . Sometimes they are worse than the reality which force them on us . . . Sometimes not . . .

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

what a way to wake up!!

"Silence"

Shadows fall upon her