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The Flame that burns within the beauty
Of Your auburn hair
Crowning
The sensuousness
The God
Bestow upon your loveliness
Reminds me of the eternal flame
That lights up my soul.
~~~~*~~~~
Within the depths
Of your blest sapphire eyes
I still see
Sensuousness brewing
As I near the warmth
Of Your passionate arms.
~~~~*~~~~
Listen to the songs
I have written about you
For the forest has become
Silent
So those within
May hear them too.
~~~~*~~~~
The wind sings to me
Those words
You have whispered
In days of your loneliness.
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My soul aches with pain
We’re apart
My embrace is empty
Sigh is all my heat can do
Until the day
I find your loveliness
By my side .
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Longings, of Tom's golden hair, his sky blue eyes, his singing songs to me. This poem brings it all back as sure as can be seen. We are apart to til the end of time or when God calls me home to be with him too. Meanwhile my soul has to keep going on an on til eternity comes. Good write, this is one of my favorite of yours I read so far.
Ahhhhhhhh Wiliam, I love the soft swifting feelings that emanate from
ever line!
Romantically touching!
Warmed in Inner Peace, LOVE, Light and Wisdom! Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2007
William...very loving, touching and longing...a masterpiece, loved the flow of the words...Hugs, Peggy
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2007
Excellent William
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Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2007
So very romantic. I think I'm in love. (just kidding) It's such a beautiful poem! Holly
Stunning your love shines
Throughout the page beautiful romantic writing
Beautiful tone and longing
Excellent poetic thoughts!!
Love Peace and Hugssss to you always...Yolie
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2007
i'll jsut be brazenly honest; i wish i could exist as that first stanza. . .. egads-----
beauty~
ness
Like the peaks of two hight mountains seeing eacho other, so near and so apart, but one of the mountains will be moved by faith at its soul will wait no more.
Georg
William, this is a most beautiful romantic writing...the first verse is great and the others are too. I love the flow of this and the images I imagined as I read the poem. You have a knack for this type poetry...a gem.
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ever line!
Romantically touching!
Warmed in Inner Peace, LOVE, Light and Wisdom! Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
Stay safe
Throughout the page beautiful romantic writing
Beautiful tone and longing
Excellent poetic thoughts!!
Love Peace and Hugssss to you always...Yolie
beauty~
ness
Sighhhhhh!!
Love Tinka
Rose
So lovely, so flowing, and so romantic..all wonderful aspects of this poem. I just loved it, Sometimes Love can move mountains...
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Georg
I have written about you
For the forest has become
Silent
So those within
May hear them too.
Then they surely must be very very good, D'Artagnan!