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Darkness
by William Bonilla → (All Poetry by William Bonilla)
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Darkness *~~ Void resides within the Darkness No colors Not even shadows Dancing on the walls. ~~* Whatever moves won’t be seen Just heard, maybe felt Creeping or slithering. *~~ Silently some walk up webs Of deceive Constructed to trap to capture prey Alive they struggle As they have their juices of life Suckled From the weak or the caught Unfortunate souls They see not the transparent adhesive That snarls their miserable existence. ~~* Darkness is praised Darkness is feared Darkness is welcome By lovers obsessed with passion In the heat of sensuous transactions Taking some to where they’ve Never been Some never seen Entwined in positions dreamt Positions unheard nor tried. *~~ Within the Darkness people cry and die People scream and dream Some sleep till the morning Feeling refresh, rewarded Relieved From the fears of Darkness They’re survived another night. ~~* By: William Bonilla “D’Artagnan” 11/23/08

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors

Reviewed on December 17, 2008

This poem was much different than what I expected from its title. Well done, William. Eileen

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on December 1, 2008

William,
I like how you cover so many emotions in this one write. Well done!
Sheila

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 30, 2008

This is different to read...usually you write such wonderful love poems...but me being a lover of dark poetry am trilled to read your dark pen. Well done, blessings, Holly

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

A dark write, very well penned ... well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Makes me think of 'Let there be Light' ...very good poem William.. much love,
Christine

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Great write William, Darkness shows many things, fear, quietness, relief when its over. Well done, Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

This is a fantastic and well written poem.I enjoy reading it,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Powerful, intense and just Awesome writing, Sweet William! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

You always can fight those shadows with an humble lighted candle.
Then, D'Artagnan...see those stone stairs going up? they will take you out of the dungeons...

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

You've left my thoughts to run wild! Excellent work, William!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on November 29, 2008

Some fear the darkness, some relish in the darkness, but you my friend write lovely words about the darkness. I really enjoyed this mystic poem, so when do we share a darkness collaboration? You and me in the darkness..now that sounds like an exciting adventure!

Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

yes--i am in agreement--very creative!

Reviewed by Linda Hill

William,
Excellent write! As James says, Gothic work. I wish I could write like that.

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Great writing sweet man..Hugssss

Reviewed by J. Pajot

Darkness is all those things and more...well written Gothic work.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Very intense and lots of room for reader interpretation in this one William.

fee

Reviewed by John Leko

...pen of shadows...lives within this poetry of darkness...until it dawns on one.
interesting and very well written William...
John