The weather channel tells us of two storms out in the Gulf of Mexico heading inland.Last year at this time I ran a gallery at St. Armand's Key near Longboat. I have many friends and relatives in the Brandon/Tampa area. I wish them well.
Although I love a fierce storm, it proposes great danger for man. I can't help but love the passions it carries.
There's nothing like Mother nature's power plays!!!
Susan*
~SKR~
You sense when a great storm approaches
It rambles and shakes from the floor
Feels like horses stampeding
Just nature marching once more
The awesome drips that are speeding
Like bullets when rain hits the roof
Its hard to quiet your heartbeat
When drops are like horses hooves
They seem to be chasing their shadows
The shadows being the clouds
The darkness of forces approaching
Thunder that threatens...out loud
Flares of natures ambition
Feeding the earth with such force
Spears of light...ammunition
Threatening us all on her course
Marching like Sherman she broaches
The marshes that lead to the sea
Afterward calming her creatures
The animals, birds and then me
The calm after she leaves us
Its heaven smitten with greens
Limes and colors of emeralds
Washed over and smelling so clean.
Susan, this magnificent composition, is just bursting off the page with rich, powerful imagery and the awe inspiring and utterly frightening visuals as Mother Nature herself as she approaches. Yet, it has the calming affect of her wonderful glory and scent after a violent storm passes by and scrubs the earth. Absolutely a brilliant piece of work my friend! Thank you for sharing your remarkable talent.
With the visuals your superb words painted I'm
already in that storm. I too love storms Susan
but of course not the damage they do.Hope if they
come there will be kindness shown in that department.;-)
Wonderful poetry!
Storms do clean up the ravages of mans supposed dominance over Nature...you have clearly described how Nature does feel herein, Susan, seems that the rain is heading north towards NJ to rain on the parade for this coming weekend! But we have had so many beauties, even the merchants cannot complain this year...! Peace thru the Power of Nature, Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
Great poem! I'm a lover of storms too. You just got to respect them! God in his wisdom made storms for a reason...
Explore the mystery of how nature makes unexpected gifts of creative wonders to an unsuspecting caregiver one late night and early morning in southeastern Georgia, USA.
Explore the mystery of how nature makes unexpected gifts of creative wonders to an unsuspecting caregiver one late night and early morning in southeastern Georgia, USA.
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already in that storm. I too love storms Susan
but of course not the damage they do.Hope if they
come there will be kindness shown in that department.;-)
Wonderful poetry!
i see the storm goddess has inspired your poetry--now you see where i get my inspiration! BRAVA, well done! WOW, this one is powerful! stay safe
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
Love Tinka
Beautiful
Superb write - images beyond words - excellent!
Robert