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Details
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You see that freckle
-----------Well I feel you there
Tangled follicles
-----------> And you're over here
At the stop light
Driving to town
I sense your sparkle
I know your frown
Tasting blackberry
Raspberry jam
I rock in your passion
You're where I am
Quantum physics
Inner eye
I'm inside you
You're inside my....

MY Oh My
What a treat
You're within me
It's a detailed feast!


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 Reviews of "Details"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 9, 2006
Freckles entwined. Why is this erotic?

Ron

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 7, 2006
Lovely Poem!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on April 7, 2006
what a Russian doll you are, susan. There is layer upon layer to this poem... 'a detailed feast'.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2006
Sumtin' ta think about. Uh, I'm a-thinking. Okay. Thought dat out and come up wid dis. You won purdy good . . . er . . . blackberry-jam sweetie wid juicy-sounding words, y'all.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 6, 2006
excellent play on words ... cool ...

Reviewed on April 6, 2006
Susan,

Adorable. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 6, 2006
Great whimsical penning Susan! Love the word play;-)

Eileen

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on April 6, 2006
Susan
That sounds a good place to be...lols
Love the picture..
Peter


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