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Mystic Marsh Morning
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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Susan K. de Vegter
copyright 2006


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In the mystic haze of morning
With the call of a passing Loon
Just when the night is over
When the outline of the moon
Is blending into daylight
Still haunting all the same
It comes as the tide rises to full
Pure nature...
Raw...
Untamed.
The shrimp hopping in silver
Threads of phosphorous light
Spot Bass as they roll
Dining on these
Bullets of flashing light
Tails clicking a whisper
A swish...
A plop...
A splash
Just ahead of danger
As the shrimp make a final dash
Then in the reeds stealthily
Looming just beyond site
The king of the marsh birds stalks his prey
Waiting for his first bite
His eyes chase shadows in shallows
Then just when the timing's right
His neck is a lighning fast trigger
When the morning captures the night
Breakfast for creatures of nature
Foodchain that balances out
The call of hungry stomachs
As marsh mornings wake up and shout!

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 Reviews of "Mystic Marsh Morning"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 16, 2006
Wish I was there...

Ron

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 13, 2006
Another great offering Susan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on May 13, 2006
Just love the imagery here Susan you catch the moment well. love that pic too.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2006
Nature in motion within the structure of this poem of survival and death all tied up into one very interesting bit of wordplay.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on May 12, 2006
Beautifully done Susan
A picture painted with words
Outstanding write

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 12, 2006
a feast of imagery and atmosphere ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 12, 2006
Susan, the imagery in this is flawless! Talk about word paintings this one is a masterpiece!

eT


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