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It's Raining Moonbeams
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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The storm is raging a magic
Phenomenol in phosphorous tunes
Saturating the ground with nutrients
But Oh how I miss the moon
If only the moon wasn't hidden
The mystery would be more defined
With rain sliding down every moonbeam
Silhouettes of lovers would shine
The wind would scatter in droplets
A kaliedescope of tehnicolor
Drizzling passion in moon shine
Upon all the passionate lovers
Love and rain is magic
Moon shadows give out a glow
Together the mood changes magic
When fluid moonbeams are aflow.

copyright 2006

Susan Kathryn de Vegter

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 Reviews of "It's Raining Moonbeams"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 25, 2006
Nice juxtoposition.

Ron

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 25, 2006
Susan

A very fluid and delectable symphony, that nourishes the perceptory senses and registers visually and viscerally.

How I love the Moon too !

Blessings
Peter

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 25, 2006
This is fine poetry!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 25, 2006
This flowed like a gentle stream Belle. Mated beautifully with the image. You have such artistic sensibilities.

Light and Love ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed on August 25, 2006
Liquid pleasure in verse, Susan, beautifully penned creativity! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


Reviewed on August 25, 2006
What beautiful imagery! This is one lovely poem Susan!

Reindeer

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on August 25, 2006
Flowing, flooding moonbeans replace old moonshine and others in this sensous romp in the rain. Sparkiling new word grouping replace cliches and tell a never ending story, a newer way. Good writing, nice lady... one of your much better ones.
- Bill

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 25, 2006
Oh Susan this has captured the magic of raindrops and the romance of the moon and combined them to pull at all of our romance urges. It makes me wish for a stormy night, candlelight and a woman who won't put up a fight. Seriously this is beautiful...one of my favs.
Fee

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on August 24, 2006
Oh how beautiful a storm would be in the rhapsody of the moonlight. Oh how wonderful and joyous a love could be drenched in it's rain if the lovers hearts are right. Simply magic. Pierre.

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on August 24, 2006
"With rain sliding down every moonbeam
Silhouettes of lovers would shine"

And each multifaceted rain drop reflects those moonbeam slides sending rainbows of color infused love. Just a glorious spectrum of words < Susan. You brightened up my stormy night.
Love to you my friend,
Taylor

Reviewed on August 24, 2006
Aren't we all tuned to the weather to change our moods? Sometimes I just love the rain when it pours. It gives me a good release of my feelings.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 24, 2006
I'm in a phantasmagoric dream,with this colorama romantic poem!
Beautiful Sis!

Eileen

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on August 24, 2006
Slathered with frosted-mosaic passion, a soft-focus view and I hear Cat Stevens' Moon Shadow playing in the background...

Sage

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on August 24, 2006
you bring the moon's spirit and power to light in this poem! absolutely beautiful...magical, as is the moon.

Susan

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2006
Oh how I wish I could write like you Susan from your soul..This IS your talent, your true gift~~~STUNNING...Still have your Mom in prayer~~

Love & Prayers, Dove


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