The storm is raging a magic
Phenomenol in phosphorous tunes
Saturating the ground with nutrients
But Oh how I miss the moon
If only the moon wasn't hidden
The mystery would be more defined
With rain sliding down every moonbeam
Silhouettes of lovers would shine
The wind would scatter in droplets
A kaliedescope of tehnicolor
Drizzling passion in moon shine
Upon all the passionate lovers
Love and rain is magic
Moon shadows give out a glow
Together the mood changes magic
When fluid moonbeams are aflow.
Flowing, flooding moonbeans replace old moonshine and others in this sensous romp in the rain. Sparkiling new word grouping replace cliches and tell a never ending story, a newer way. Good writing, nice lady... one of your much better ones.
- Bill
Oh Susan this has captured the magic of raindrops and the romance of the moon and combined them to pull at all of our romance urges. It makes me wish for a stormy night, candlelight and a woman who won't put up a fight. Seriously this is beautiful...one of my favs.
Fee
Oh how beautiful a storm would be in the rhapsody of the moonlight. Oh how wonderful and joyous a love could be drenched in it's rain if the lovers hearts are right. Simply magic. Pierre.
"With rain sliding down every moonbeam
Silhouettes of lovers would shine"
And each multifaceted rain drop reflects those moonbeam slides sending rainbows of color infused love. Just a glorious spectrum of words < Susan. You brightened up my stormy night.
Love to you my friend,
Taylor
Explore the mystery of how nature makes unexpected gifts of creative wonders to an unsuspecting caregiver one late night and early morning in southeastern Georgia, USA.
Explore the mystery of how nature makes unexpected gifts of creative wonders to an unsuspecting caregiver one late night and early morning in southeastern Georgia, USA.
Ron
A very fluid and delectable symphony, that nourishes the perceptory senses and registers visually and viscerally.
How I love the Moon too !
Blessings
Peter
Love Tinka
Light and Love ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reindeer
- Bill
Fee
Silhouettes of lovers would shine"
And each multifaceted rain drop reflects those moonbeam slides sending rainbows of color infused love. Just a glorious spectrum of words < Susan. You brightened up my stormy night.
Love to you my friend,
Taylor
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Beautiful Sis!
Eileen
Sage
Susan
Love & Prayers, Dove