I lie here in the after glow of honey on my walls
The shadows leap in golden hues as night shades gently fall
The evening glow of Autumn time, the silence of the marsh
Peach hues bounce from the sprays of natures own air brush
The distant rock of waves that lap against a swaying dock
From tides that come and go with ease...steady as a rock
The sunset speaks a quiet hum to souls that need a rest
As evening whispers through a breeze and flows across my chest
I breathe in deep the colors of cherished Autumn glows
It fills my being so complete and enriches all my pores
Energies of quiet sparks leap from prisms deep
And marshes fade into the night as nature bids us sleep .
I absolutely loved your line....."I breathe in deep the colors of cherished Autumn glows"that pretty much sums how I feel about
autumn,thanks great write,
stan
Beautiful imagery. I love the line I breathe in deep the colors of cherished Autumn glows Simply beautiful.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
"I lie here in the after glow of honey on my walls" . . . This whole damn poem is a Freudian masterpiece . . . If you didn't mean it that way, you should have . . . But I know you DID mean it that way . . . You could bot have written it any other way . . . One fantastic line after another . . . Damn!!! . . . Am I the only one to GET this? . . .
Soothing to the soul to read and calming to the mind to watch as you unwrap this stunning landscape to share with us...lovely Susan, thank you for sharing...
hugs
Fee
Explore the mystery of how nature makes unexpected gifts of creative wonders to an unsuspecting caregiver one late night and early morning in southeastern Georgia, USA.
A book of nature inspired poems and essays, written from the heart and soul of a life-long nature, animal, and wilderness lover, and dedicated to today’s children - Earth's only hope for a better tomorrow.
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Ron
Love Tinka
Pretty vivid imagery, and remarkably sensual.
Kathy
:-)
autumn,thanks great write,
stan
hugs
Fee
Picture perfect scene
Enjoyable read
Peace & Love be with you
William
John
This is stunning. The picture, the words and the energy.
Thank you, I shall go to sleep with your images in my mind.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.