My Friend, a Fruitloop (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 18, 2008

This is well written Susan, I love the descriptive lines, short and precise. The humor too.

Axilea

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)

Reviewed on March 10, 2008

fruitloop partner to this silly woman???-why would you call yourself silly?? I for one think you are a wonderful person and a good friend to all-still I did like your poem

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on March 1, 2008

Anybody who comes in colors is a friend of mine.

Ron

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on February 27, 2008

I am sure you've made your friend feel very special. This was a beautiful poem you wrote for him. He should be proud to have you as a friend too. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on February 26, 2008

Really special tribute here. Great read. Thanks for sharing it.

Reviewed by Ed J.

Reviewed on February 26, 2008

One can never have enough friends, Wonderful write.

Stay southern and keep writing.

Ed

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 26, 2008

Nice to have a good friend!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 26, 2008

Your friend looks like he is pondering the ill's of the world with a face only a mother could love...;) ed

Reviewed by stan nassano

Reviewed on February 26, 2008

always good to have a friend like your's...pass the milk.........
stan

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 26, 2008

Well I don't know if I am all that
But that is my picture
And Vanilla rhymes with Bonilla
And I don't remember giving you my piture
Peace & love be with you Susan

William

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 26, 2008

True friends are truly one of life's greatest treasures.

And I love that pic!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 26, 2008

Concur with Jerry, Susan - he loves you for YOU. As do I. Fruitloops and all. :) Well done!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 26, 2008

"He sees the flower in my weeds" . . . THAT says it all, my friend . . .

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 26, 2008

And how lovely your Bill is!!! I bet he going ape when you are around.

Georg

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega

Reviewed on February 26, 2008

A friend is a friend no matter what. What a joy it is when you know
that not only are you a friend to another but when you can actually feel beyond a doubt that they are a friend to you too.

Love, Pierre

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 26, 2008

Beautiful tribute to Bill, Susan; very well penned! Love that pic; who can love that face?? Only his mama knows for sure! LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 25, 2008

all good cereals require the milk of friendship ... nourishing!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 25, 2008

Anyone who has you for a friend is blessed much more than they know! Beautiful work sis!

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on February 25, 2008

...sounds like a colorful fellow to have around...rain or shine...a friend of thine.
genuine pen in light tones of humor...
John

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 25, 2008

such a very sweet tribute to your friend and the friendship you share