It's Springtime and the feathers are spread, the eyes glued to motion and the dance of love is stroking the pulse of all Nature's creatures.
*SKR*
Amor Spoken Here
Sunsets of marigolds...birds on the wind
Love in the songs...echoes that spin
Springs in the air...aroma of musk
Lovers hold hands...from dawn to dusk
Fountains that flow...waters that shoot
Arrows from Cupid...hearts here to loot
Rhythms that beat...some are off key
Oceans with tides...fish in the sea
Silhouettes bold...up on the sands
This is the spirit...love ever grand
Strutting with pride...heads held high
Struggling for space...do it or die
Nature is having...this spring fling of love
For all of her creatures...here and above
The world is intune so keep your dispair
In tack, for now...amor spoken here
For now those of you who haven't the chance
Get up from your chair...take up this dance
Its up to you...go pledge a cause
Open your plummage...hear the applause
Let down your hair...smile for a change
Top off the hurt...let go the pangs
Give it a ten...hold out those fingers
Reach out for hope...kiss lips that linger
Don't let it pass you...it won't stay long
Open those ears...hear love's sweet song
Watch how the Bluebirds and Egrets go to it
Puzzles of love...find pieces that fit
Learn from this nature...they're teachers too
Sing from your heart...sweethearts to woo
Nest in the bed...of love waiting near
Give it a chance...amor spoken here.
Hmmm...I speak Amor all the time so it does come natural. :) I don't know why I love this write so much...not only is it brilliant and beautiful but it speaks my language and so smoothly.
Amor
Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
your soul is saturated with pure passion
brava
Reviewed by Four Provinces (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Brilliant word picture - I like the way you alternate your syllable count too - it flows so effortlessly -
4Ps
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
Ok Susan dear...Now this is my favorite so far...I absolutely love this poem..I inhaled it..Bravo.Graphics also beautiful..floria
Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
i do enjoy how you capture the thoughts in your head.
This was just wonderful! so glad I found it this morning,
simply beautiful,
Reindeer
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
Good Morning, Susan
Spring has arrived
Love can make you a bride
If you give the guy a chance to take you on his side.
Another lovely poem by my friends muse.
Susan, beautiful poem. Too often we forget the little things around us that can make one happy. Your poem pointed out quite a few. Thank You for the reminder. I'll take a little time to smell the roses.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
Susan,
I your love muse is working in the stars too.
Beautiful write.
Peggy
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
Nice rhythm to this...this baby swings.
Love it.
~E
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
"Aqui se habla de Amor." A beautiful poem of emotions and colors of the rainbow. You have sometime in common with Erica who commented on you. You are both so highly intellignet and beautiful. I have seen your bio picture and you are exquisitely
lovely. Love your poetry and the masterful grasp and skill you exhibit in your poetry. Wish I could write like you. Bill
A book of nature inspired poems and essays, written from the heart and soul of a life-long nature, animal, and wilderness lover, and dedicated to today’s children - Earth's only hope for a better tomorrow.
This book won 'The Poetry Category'
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Amor
brava
4Ps
It's what I hope for. Be free like the breeze.
Beautiful! goin' in my library!!
simply beautiful,
Reindeer
Spring has arrived
Love can make you a bride
If you give the guy a chance to take you on his side.
Another lovely poem by my friends muse.
ty
tony
I your love muse is working in the stars too.
Beautiful write.
Peggy
Love it.
~E
lovely. Love your poetry and the masterful grasp and skill you exhibit in your poetry. Wish I could write like you. Bill