I'm with Ron on this: unless she is a minutewoman, your poem brings me an image of a happy bouquet left to wither on the table because trimming ends and placing in water is just too much effort. Effective verbal sketch. ~~ Diana
I took a minute and read it. I laughed a minute and loved it. Some of our best things are done in the last minute. Lovemaking isn't one of them. Your poetry writing is.
:) Janna
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