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he died Trying
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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This touches me because I did the same dumb thing back when I was a kid trying to serve my country and venture out. I made it out of boot camp and survived. Another fellow recruit did also, I witnessed the beating he took first hand, live and in living color. The motivation he recieved did help him. He was one of the first to qualify in our swimming class.

A young man,
just a young kid.
Join the Marines,
he couldn't swim good.
He was beat and abused
by the drill instructors,
and his fellow Marines.


Eventually he drowned,
never made it out of boot camp.
His family stated on the news,
"he was a weak swimmer."
Yet none of them,
tried to stop him.


I thought it foolish
for him to go on
such an adventure.


But I feel in my heart,
he is just as much of
a hero
as any other Marine.


I salute this brave young man,

on this Memorial day.

G

 


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 Reviews of "he died Trying"
Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran
Reviewed on June 2, 2005
good write!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 1, 2005
Yes he was brave, maybe too brave..
Hi Grady.......

Reviewed on June 1, 2005
how awful! god be with him, and god you! thank you for serving our country! i will always remember and never forget! so thank you, VET!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed on June 1, 2005
Grady,

How sad--and yes, he did his bit. He served his country and went through personal battle...God bless his family.

And thank you, Sir, for YOUR service and for sharing this powerful write.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 1, 2005
I am with you here Grady!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 1, 2005
I salute him with you, Grady.

I also had a very similar experience - a fellow overweight recruit passed out and died out on the obstacle course - in 98 degree heat - and all several people had to say was, "He was too fat anyway."

And like you, I will never forget this young man - he had 'more guts' (the good kind) than a lot of folks I know.


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