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Just in Time
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I caught up with myself just in time...

With 24 hours in a day,
work eight plus for my pay,
sleep eight for my rest,
after 24 I've past the test,
at least tried to do my best.
Or have I really applied,
should I multiply or divide?


After about working five,
all I want to do is
take a break and jive.
I'm suppose to be a poet,
sometimes I don't want to do it.
I try writing on my book,
only too see my eyelids look.


I'm very good at loafing,
if loafing made a man wealthy,
I'd be a rich man healthy.
Time is the real foe,
it's just in time I know.
Then again it's my own head,
the reason I'm still in the red.


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 Reviews of "Just in Time"
Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on May 29, 2007
Fun poem and makes me think of myself. I could make a career out of loafing. R

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2007
A universal wish, for sure. Lady J

Reviewed on May 24, 2007
How'd I miss this?? This seems to be the working man's curse Grady, mired up in or trying to stay out of the red. Well penned as always.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 24, 2007
A fun offering SIR grady!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on May 24, 2007
Love your endless supply of wonderful rhyming words my friend...if it weren't for strong, black coffee, well I would be seeing more of my eye lids...didn't fix a pot the other evening when I came home...guess what? Yeap eye lids! Thankful for the day, health, and life, but there just don't seem to be enough time in the day to get it all done! Funny, how when I was a kid the day seemed to last forever! Not anymore! Enjoyed One, keep em coming, but take a short mini vacation if needed, work on that book!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 24, 2007
What they said about counting all your blessings? and how much a blessing is going for this days?
Hey! funny man, at least you are rich with words!!!
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 23, 2007
a fun write

Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Reviewed on May 23, 2007
This is a cute write. I think we can all identify with this one.
God Bless,
Lew

Reviewed on May 23, 2007
good one, one; very well done! always a pleasure reading you!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D


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