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Sucker Punched
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(Didn't see it coming!)
Right out of the womb I came Didn't even have a name Life sucker punched me hard Before I even got a good start Hell, I couldn't even walk Must less talk Goo Goo dad dad First words I probably said Finally learned to walk on my feet Which was really neat Ouch! dog bit my seat Learn to run or end up dead meat Black eye Man, did I cry All of a sudden under attack You mean I'm suppose to fight back On the run again To young to know how too defend Tought the other kid was a friend Fool wanted my lunch money My nose end up all runny What a pretty bubble bee Ouch! it stung the crap out me You mean I can do more than pee with it Little girl screamed quit Then I took a face hit Still wouldn't quit Took another hit Grown now Now I know when to quit When to hit Kill every bee I see No more sucker punching here No more young fear Coming dear! Ouch, hey watch the eye! Not good for a grown man to cry

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Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

There is humor in this, great write.

Nancy

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

You have a unique way of looing at things. Never lose your sense of humor. Never !

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

Been there...done that....funny Grady..you are tooooooooo funny....floria

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

Funny write, nothing wrong with returning fire.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

GRADY, you are too much! HA! i have been sucker-punched from life, too, but because i have been sucker-punched, i am stronger, and i am a better person for it! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

(((grady))) LOL you are too much...i love this! many have been sucker punched from life...life is cold and cruel...it's how we learn to duck and dodge and roll with the punches that determines our strength to face it head on...great write, grady! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. *still chuckling* i'm not laughing at you, i'm laughing with you...'cause i've been sucker punched a time or two *ow my eye*

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

OH GRADY!

This is not cute or nice. It is GOOD! It gives that extra dimension to what life is really like for a person from the male species. I like the thoughts you elaborate on. This is good. Teresa

I enjoyed!

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

I really enjoyed this, still laughing! Think I'll get another cup of tea and read it again!

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

Black eye / Man, did I cry / All of a sudden under attack / You mean I'm suppose to fight back

Took me two of those before I learned my lesson...great read!

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